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The Serenade

The Serenade

A Poem by Suhd


Cologne, the dulcet showers
hit the panoramic pane
As she stands behind the window 
under which I stood and sang.
They're bewitchingly analogous,
Ergo their names I switched,
From now on April is her name

© 2017 Suhd


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You write beautifully! Every piece from you is so unique :)

Posted 2 Years Ago


You have stirred my senses with this delightful write. A short poem and yet it is rich in imagery and feeling. I wanted to be her standing at the window, while being serenaded. Lovely work. Romantic and uplifting.

Chris

Posted 2 Years Ago


Suhd

2 Years Ago

I'm glad I could. Thank you so much.
The dulcet showers, the cologne serenade all the senses. April was never portrayed this beautifully.

Posted 2 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Suhd

2 Years Ago

Ah! I'm humbled by this, my friend!
Dhara_Ditzy Kat

2 Years Ago

Richly deserved praise Suhd!
This is beautiful in it's unique way. Love this

Posted 3 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Suhd

3 Years Ago

Thank you so much :)
Hmm...I see you got a strange penchant for switching one's name with 'april'!! Lol...really don't know why. This piece certainly left me wondering. It is very beautifully written though. Great stuff!

Posted 3 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Suhd

3 Years Ago

Zoe, I wanted to portray the poetic beauty. April is spring and sweet fragrance and beauty, so that'.. read more
Zoya

3 Years Ago

Ah, I see. Very welcome!
THIS.

im a fan, this was beautiful

Posted 3 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

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A nice piece of Romanticism.

Made me think of Romeo serenading Juliet underneath her balcony in the moonlight.

Some excellent words used in this piece to create the mood beyond the simplicity of the content.

Nice work.

Posted 3 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Suhd

3 Years Ago

Thanks much Doodley :)
You create scenes and images and then cherished names. Fulfilling...:)..................

Posted 4 Years Ago


Suhd

4 Years Ago

Thank you Sami for your review...!
Sami Khalil

4 Years Ago

You are welcome...:)..................
I liked the poem. The words led to good place and ending. I like how you use words. Made the reader feel the place and the wonder. Thank you for sharing the amazing poetry.
Coyote

Posted 4 Years Ago


Suhd

4 Years Ago

Thank you so much for reading it. I'm glad you liked it !
Coyote Poetry

4 Years Ago

Was my pleasure and you are welcome.
wow...wonderful work suhd..i loved it!

Posted 4 Years Ago


Suhd

4 Years Ago

Thanks a ton Wajiha :)
Wajiha Nayeem

4 Years Ago

my pleasure suhd!

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