You and I

You and I

A Poem by Suhd
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Remains of love

"
I am a Grecian Palace,
And the Sweet-Musty Scent that accompanies it
Is You.

© 2018 Suhd


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What an exotic way of putting it! Unique and original.

Posted 5 Years Ago


Suhd

5 Years Ago

Thanks a lot, once again.
You said everything needed in the short poem. Perfect ending to the outstanding poetry my friend.
Coyote

Posted 5 Years Ago


Suhd

5 Years Ago

Thanks a lot friend for such encouraging words.
Coyote Poetry

5 Years Ago

You are welcome my friend.
Short, sweet and to the point.
Thank you for sharing

Posted 5 Years Ago


A brief but heartfelt poem :)

Posted 6 Years Ago


Suhd

6 Years Ago

Thanks a lot :)
A brief masterpiece about.. the senses.

Posted 6 Years Ago


Suhd

6 Years Ago

Thanks for reading !
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Nicely written in much limited words. Great work

Posted 6 Years Ago


Suhd

6 Years Ago

Thank you Raas !
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6 Years Ago

You're welcome
I think this is just a really nice, simple poem, and I don’t have much to say, because there is nothing I find bad and everything that I find good... and I just think this is pure dead lovely.

Enjoyed.

Posted 6 Years Ago


Suhd

6 Years Ago

Thank you Hannah for this nice review. I'm glad that you liked it.
Musty musk? I can smell it just beautiful- soft deep and enviting- wonderful words-🌹

Posted 6 Years Ago


Suhd

6 Years Ago

Thank you so much :)
‘Thoughts In Time’🌹

6 Years Ago

My pleasure🌹
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Sweet or musty? That is the question!

For a sweet scent will increase the splendour of your palace and a musty smell will diminish it.

Clever write.

Posted 6 Years Ago


Suhd

6 Years Ago

You're totally right. Thanks my friend :)
These 4 lines can be interpreted in a 1000 different ways. I don't know which one to go with. :p I think this is an attribute of a good writing. :)

Posted 6 Years Ago


Suhd

6 Years Ago

Thank you so much for all the compliments. They mean a lot coming from a gifted writer :)
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Voice

6 Years Ago

You're welcome. I am humbled :)
Oh sorry, it appeared as 4 lines in my phone.
Suhd

6 Years Ago

Oh it's fine!

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Added on March 10, 2018
Last Updated on March 10, 2018
Tags: Love, old, Grecian, negative capability, romance, abstract

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Suhd

Abbottabad, Pakistan



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