You and I

You and I

A Poem by Suhd
"

Remains of love

"
I am a Grecian Palace,
And the Sweet-Musty Scent that accompanies it
Is You.

© 2018 Suhd


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Haha, quite an oxymoron there - 'sweet musty scent'. There was some humour and bittersweetness in the comparison of love here, which I did like!

Posted 6 Years Ago


Suhd

6 Years Ago

:-) Thank you Zoe. Your reviews are a pleasure to read :)
Zoya

6 Years Ago

No worries!
Unique and short. Good one.

Posted 6 Years Ago


Suhd

6 Years Ago

Thanks much :)
Najam Us Saher

6 Years Ago

You're welcome ☺
well not really and not very polite or honest interaction is it now no prizes for being a smarty pants in the adult world a thank you would have been more then enough i thank you

Posted 6 Years Ago



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Added on March 10, 2018
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Tags: Love, old, Grecian, negative capability, romance, abstract

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Suhd
Suhd

Abbottabad, Pakistan



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