I'm Sick

I'm Sick

A Poem by Suhd


© 2018 Suhd


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I think this is actually a very clever poem. Your use of the word 'schizophrenia' is, I think, an ironic play on the word. We all of us hear our 'inner voice' all of the time. In the illness of schizophrenia that 'inner voice' goes wrong. Your poem is particularly poignant ,because in the Illness, that 'voice' is often heard when one is alone. I very much doubt if you have actually got schizophrenia .......have you?


Posted 6 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Suhd

6 Years Ago

Thanks for the support and kindness and sharing your story with me.
I wish you good mental h.. read more
barleygirl

5 Years Ago

WOW! I can't even say a word becuz this conversation says it all! I wasn't sure how to read this poe.. read more
Great Aunt Astri

5 Years Ago

Lovely to see you here, Barleygirl. Sometimes affliction, or should I say 'adversity' can be very he.. read more



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There is such depth and multiplicity of meaning in your lines, Suhd. I could feel the shizophrenic’s desolate world. I could also feel the desperation of a lover! Kudos to you!

Posted 6 Years Ago


Suhd

6 Years Ago

I'm glad that you could empathize with this.

Thanks a lot, Dhara for your gentle wor.. read more
Dhara_Ditzy Kat

6 Years Ago

It was such a pleasure Suhd!
Friend, I hope you are well. If you are schizophrenic, I pray that you feel love and belonging on this Earth. You are God's creation. I hope you are well.


Posted 6 Years Ago


Suhd

6 Years Ago

Thank you friend for your kind words.
There is much sadness in these words. For those poor souls who hear voices and are sick mentally, I wish them peace from their affliction.

Chris

Posted 6 Years Ago


Suhd

6 Years Ago

Amen to that. Thanks Chris!
This is very touching. Deep and filled with longing of the one you love.
I really liked this.

Posted 6 Years Ago


Suhd

6 Years Ago

Thank you Saher :)
Najam Us Saher

6 Years Ago

I always enjoy reading your work.
It is my pleasure.

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