I Wish

I Wish

A Poem by Amanda
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I wish, I wish upon a star,
That you were not so very far,
I wish, I wish upon the light,
That I could hold you late at night,
I wish, I wish upon a well,
That your fears I could always quell, 
 I wish, I wish upon my heart,
That we will never ever part,
I wish, I wish upon the stone,
That you will always call me home,
And if I wish all of these too,
You must now know that I love you.

© 2012 Amanda


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You are so freakin' cute! : ) I never know how to comment on you when I come upon your page, for I know that what seems like often lately..... you are not as upbeat as this poem lets on about. I think you are absolutely adorable in this poem and where would this poem NOT be enjoyed? I love it. I don't consider this to be a "deep romantic write"....like suggested, but I do see it whimsical, adorable, and fun to recite! *Big Hugzz* I actually consider your "darker" writings more romantic than not. : ) They are laced with truth and a humble quality, and that is why I LOVE visiting you!! I've been a huge, but silent, fan of yours since my beginning here...... xoxo -Mark

Posted 7 Years Ago


Amanda

7 Years Ago

yaaaaaaay thanks haha
Another deep Romantical Write :)

Posted 7 Years Ago


fine

Posted 7 Years Ago


The repitition of the words "I wish, I wish" really brought this poem together.
You conveyed your emotions well and I believe you really made this piece shine with your rhyme scheme. I really enjoyed it.

Posted 7 Years Ago


Amanda

7 Years Ago

Thanks :)
I really like this(: it's really cute and sweet, and I like the whole "I wish" thing (: great job with this!

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Great poem! I liked the 'I wish, I wish' concept, flowed very nicely, it was short and sweet. Good job!

Posted 7 Years Ago


Amanda

7 Years Ago

Thanks :)
I know how you feel here. Good job with conveying emotions, and nice flow.

Posted 7 Years Ago


Amanda

7 Years Ago

Thanks
Aww. Very sweet

Posted 7 Years Ago


Amanda

7 Years Ago

Thanks :)
David the writer

7 Years Ago

Np, watch out I got news so I'm gonna pm ya :D
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Very beautiful ,Amanda. :)

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Amanda

7 Years Ago

Thanks dude :)

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