Do You Still Love Me?

Do You Still Love Me?

A Poem by Amanda
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You say that you love me,
But I wonder if that's true.
All these pretty girls I see,
All of them hang on you.
You said we'd be forever,
Our love would never die.
Then my trust you sever...
Was everything a lie?
I knew I never deserved your love,
I knew you were too great.
Your love pure white like a dove,
But its begun to dull as of late.
You say that you love me,
But I wonder if that's true.
All these pretty girls I see,
All of them hang on you.
You said we'd be forever,
Our love would never die.
Then my trust you sever...
Was everything a lie?
I know your past was so rough,
I know you need something lovely.
But I won't ever be enough,
The problem is I am me.
You say that you love me,
But I wonder if that's true.
All these pretty girls I see,
All of them hang on you.
You said we'd be forever,
Our love would never die.
Then my trust you sever...
Was everything a lie?
Sometimes at night I lay and cry,
Because you've always helped me through,
But I never seem to help you do anything but sigh.
My one wish is to be good enough for you.
You say that you love me,
But I wonder if that's true.
All these pretty girls I see,
All of them hang on you.
You said we'd be forever,
Our love would never die.
Then my trust you sever...
Was everything a lie?

© 2012 Amanda


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Very sad... Beautifully written.

Posted 10 Years Ago


Still love you manda :D.
This poem has so much emotion but then again all your poems do. You're talented. I just want to see you in a happy place :)

Posted 10 Years Ago


Beautiful emotions portrayed here!

"But its begun to dull as of late." I don't think you need the word 'but' in this line. It broke the flow of your piece for me and I think your point gets across without the 'but' being there. Just a suggestion though!

Well done with this writing Mandabear!

Posted 10 Years Ago


Interesting poem, usually the person who really loves you back comes back, he just needs time to find himself, probably he's not doing nothing/probably he's doing everything but eventually he will be back...anyway well done

Posted 10 Years Ago


excellent

Posted 10 Years Ago


Beautiful heartfelt write about the often one sided nature of love. Nice work

Posted 11 Years Ago


wow such a heartfelt write, very emotional. Great job expressing yourself!

Posted 11 Years Ago


a very sad heartfelt piece for sure, and well written. Thanks for sharing!

Posted 11 Years Ago


i feel for you, sounds like young love, one that needs to heal, which will take time. You find that person that understands you as a person, then when you lose them, your life as a whole begins to crumble. Loved the poem, great job.

Posted 11 Years Ago


Amanda

11 Years Ago

Thanks
this is an amazing poem!!! you can feel the hurt :( i hope no one actually did that to you and if so... who do i need to beat up!!!

Posted 11 Years Ago


Amanda

11 Years Ago

Thanks Rhea xD

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Added on December 24, 2012
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