Art out of Frame

Art out of Frame

A Poem by Summer Emswiler
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For a friend who will never grasp just how beautiful she is.

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Art out of Frame
The beauty that radiates when you smile
Your eyes as fresh as frost on glass
Purple tones just like the Lily of the Nile
That takes me in like the ground of morass

The happiness that beams in a low glow
Your heart shines so bright, somehow energy oppressed
Celestial Blue rays! Snuffed out, prevented to show
That you can grow, forbidden to protest!

The strength you have gained from what you endured
Your mind is beautifully inspired
Azalea Pink aura so enamored
That it shocks me no one has inquired

"How did that painting get out of her frame?"
But you are a Living work of pure art

© 2021 Summer Emswiler


Author's Note

Summer Emswiler
I would love to see the theme that my readers get from this poem.

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had to read a couple times ... opening lines are stunning says i .. and how she apparently sees herself "...a ground of morass" is in such sharp contrast .. for me it defines the theme right there. a bit of editing will make the read smoother V2 L1 "beans" should be beams, me thinks?! ;) the "frame" i take to be as art that steps out of focus for itself .. I think you keep the theme throughout .. love that first verse!
E.

Posted 3 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Summer Emswiler

3 Months Ago

Thank you! Especially for cathing that typo :o
How would you edit it, I am curious.
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Einstein Noodle

3 Months Ago

mostly edit for typos ..there is another in V3 L4 .."That is .."should be "That it" me thinks. ...i .. read more



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had to read a couple times ... opening lines are stunning says i .. and how she apparently sees herself "...a ground of morass" is in such sharp contrast .. for me it defines the theme right there. a bit of editing will make the read smoother V2 L1 "beans" should be beams, me thinks?! ;) the "frame" i take to be as art that steps out of focus for itself .. I think you keep the theme throughout .. love that first verse!
E.

Posted 3 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Summer Emswiler

3 Months Ago

Thank you! Especially for cathing that typo :o
How would you edit it, I am curious.
This comment has been deleted by the poster.
Einstein Noodle

3 Months Ago

mostly edit for typos ..there is another in V3 L4 .."That is .."should be "That it" me thinks. ...i .. read more
Hello, Summer! :)
To me this reads as a sonnet, minus the meter. The theme; you're using color to describe someone, with compliments. Maybe you chose the colors to represent a bruised ego.

Posted 3 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Summer Emswiler

3 Months Ago

Thank you so much! I love your interpretation.

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Added on April 13, 2021
Last Updated on April 19, 2021
Tags: friendship, love, friends, art, poem, dedication, beauty, strength, happiness, celstial, smile, eyes, frost, purple, lily, flower, heart

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Summer Emswiler
Summer Emswiler

helotes, TX



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Hello! A little about me, I am a broke college student who uses poetry as an outlet. I want to one day own my own little coffee shop but being a barista at a little family-owned coffee shop will d.. more..

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