Summer

Maybe you can love summer too. ^_^

I love summer.
There are times where I want to just float in the water.
To relax and be with someone you trust and wouldn't be a bummer.
Let the sun touch your body when you're just there.
Let your feet get burried in the sand while you breath in fresh air.
Hear the sounds of the seagulls while they fly in the air.
Be there on a hot summer night and have a lot of company.
Be around company when the moon is bright and be a little clumsily.
Just to sit there and surround the campfire with joy and laughter.
Be there to find someone to get along with and someone to look after.
Have a summer where you will never forget.
A summer you'll never ever regret.
I promise you'll love summer.
It won't be a bummer.

Reviews

[Inject Positivity]

Summer, Hmmm!! The season of peace and beauty for me... Kind of freshness, I love summer as it brings a new dimension in our life, with warm feeling in the air how soothing and pleasing it is to lie in cold chilling water and be with someone you love to be with... Your poem speaks of beautiful thoughts about... As your profile name says it all... Well done...

Sincerely
Dhiman

[SuMM3rGiRl777]

Awesome! He he. Thanks for the read. ^_^

[Johnny]

summergirl! almost could have been a song if you used impact.. which you kind of did at the end! I loved it!

[SuMM3rGiRl777]

Lol. Cool. I'm glad you liked it. ^_^ Thanks for the read.

[Familiar Neko]

i like this one but i don't know a lot of poem's

[SuMM3rGiRl777]

Ok cool lol

[Bandit1192]

Reminds me of summer vacations at the beach. The pictures you paint with your words are beautiful.

[SuMM3rGiRl777]

Cool! Thanks! ^_^

[nocool]

reminds me.of a song...

summer loving; had me a blast...
summer loving; happened so fast..

I wish you the dream that will forever last.
great write
a memory that will forever last...

yep.. I am korn-ey :)

but isn't that the funds ha!

[SuMM3rGiRl777]

Lol. Yeah, that's funny. ^_^ it's all good.

[nocool]

I wrote that after some wine :)
really was a good write

[SuMM3rGiRl777]

Really? Well that's nice, after some wine. I haven't had some in a while. Lol. ^_^ And yeah it looks like it's pretty good.

[nocool]

I say some...(smiles)
more like a bottle..
always happens...
the more you drink the better it gets
hahaha!!!!

[SuMM3rGiRl777]

Lol. Yeah, i guess it can be. Hey, it happens. ^_^

[RJ]

this is beautifully written :)

[SuMM3rGiRl777]

Cool. Thanks! I appreciate it. ^_^

[matt]

Good poem! keep up the good writing. I take it you are in a coastal town in Texas?

[SuMM3rGiRl777]

Thanks! Lol. And not really, not where i am. ^_^

[fitz Roberts]

Who doesn't love summer love how you depict that

[SuMM3rGiRl777]

Im glad you liked it. ^_^. Some people prefer winter and i hate it. Lol.

[fitz Roberts]

Well in summer you can go get drunk on beach and all you friends can come out to play when ur a kid

[SuMM3rGiRl777]

Yeah, i think we can do more stuff in the summer than in winter. ^_^

[fitz Roberts]

Lol me too

[SuMM3rGiRl777]

^_^ Lol.. Funny.

[Jess]

A light and cheery kinda poem. Nicely portrayed.

''Let your feet get burried in the sand while you breath in fresh air.
Hear the sounds of the seagulls while they fly in the air.''---I specifically love these lines.

And btw, I enjoy summer season. Its a joy of its own.

[SuMM3rGiRl777]

Cool. Thanks! ^_^

[James Whitefall]

Welcome. Keep writing and thanks for the read