Journey

Journey

A Poem by Sunya
"

nothing much

"
Yes, we could talk for ages,
and so beautifully,
like travelling on a tour bus,
drinking beer and smoking weed,
looking outside the window on the back seat,
at the river parallel to our journey,
and each turn, bringing new photographs,
of natural beauty, and faces of different culture,
listening to blues on the headphones,
like a background music to it all,,
like the time has stopped,
and we keep moving,
through bridges, tunnels and cliffs,
forgetting our destiny....

yes, we could talk for ages,
and so vibrantly,
like the music in the forest,
like a moving wind mill,
like the shining sun,
like a gigantic waterfall,
like a throbbing heartbeat,

Yes, we could talk for ages,
And so silently,
like a Buddha on his wakefulness,
like an old man lost in nostalgia,
like a lake in the meadow,
like a child in its sleep,
like a housewife in her rest,
like a sand in the beach,
like a ocean in its deep....

Yes, we could talk for ages,
and ages would be a moment,
yes, we could talk ages,
and so beautifully,
like the first rays of the sun,
so beautifully,

© 2014 Sunya


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:) how charming!! I really liked the font and the flow... the comparisons just create a picture of scenic charm infront of my eyes.. Journey- this word has always intrigued me. I really love to travel. Trying to capture all the "photograph"- in my mind's eye ... if you are saying nothing much.. you are wrong this was so beautifully much :)

~Sophy

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Sunya

7 Years Ago

Thankyou Sophy :) it was nothing much..just the everyday beauties :) i am glad you enjoyed it



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This could be a song, easily I think.

Always so nice to have a great conversation partner.

The flow here is excellent.

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Sunya

7 Years Ago

you think? it'd be interesting to try and fill music in it :)
Thankyou :) I am glad you liked.. read more
Lovely flowing write original .

Posted 7 Years Ago


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Sunya

7 Years Ago

Thankyou :)
So picturesque. I love this.

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Sunya

7 Years Ago

Thankyou friend :) glad u stopped by
:) how charming!! I really liked the font and the flow... the comparisons just create a picture of scenic charm infront of my eyes.. Journey- this word has always intrigued me. I really love to travel. Trying to capture all the "photograph"- in my mind's eye ... if you are saying nothing much.. you are wrong this was so beautifully much :)

~Sophy

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Sunya

7 Years Ago

Thankyou Sophy :) it was nothing much..just the everyday beauties :) i am glad you enjoyed it

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Sunya
Sunya

Kathmandu, Lalitpur, Nepal



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