I Love You

I Love You

A Poem by Sunya
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If I had a day, an hour
I'd want you by my side
If i had just a breath left
I'd want you by my side
If its nothing but a stupid dream
I'd want you in my arms
If its nothing but just a glimpse
I'd want you in my arms

If you are the sky, I'd
Stretch till the horizon
If you are the sea, I'd 
Circle you as your shore
If you be a bird, I'd 
Be the wind whence you glide
If you be a kite, I'd 
Be the string to hold your flight

If you would have me tonight 
I'd hold you at my side
If you would stay beside
I'd be the happiest man alive 

© 2014 Sunya


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awwwww, this is so sweet and romantic.. look at you trying to get those butterflies, my friend.. the ending made my heart melt.. that last stanza brought it home nicely!.. I love the examples scattered throughout.. helped reinforce the lengths that the speaker would go to, the depth at which they feel.. very nice!

Posted 6 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Sunya

6 Years Ago

hehe butterflies butterflies :p
I'm glad you liked it :)
Thankyou April



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Lovely piece. I LOVE IT TOO....

Posted 6 Years Ago


Loved it! it's such a cute and romantic poem, and really is very emotional :) Very well written!

Posted 6 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Sunya

6 Years Ago

Thankyou :) I am glad you enjoyed it
awwwww, this is so sweet and romantic.. look at you trying to get those butterflies, my friend.. the ending made my heart melt.. that last stanza brought it home nicely!.. I love the examples scattered throughout.. helped reinforce the lengths that the speaker would go to, the depth at which they feel.. very nice!

Posted 6 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Sunya

6 Years Ago

hehe butterflies butterflies :p
I'm glad you liked it :)
Thankyou April

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Sunya
Sunya

Kathmandu, Lalitpur, Nepal



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