Glitter Swirls

Glitter swirls,
rainbow twirls,
luminous pearls,
ballet whirls.

Paint me a picture,
one to decipher.
Bleed out a dream,
no matter how ugly,
that it may seem.
Colorful crayons,
magic markers.
Every line created
so brightly glitters.

Sing me a song,
to scream out your heart.
So powerful that
it tears the world apart.
Emotions flowing,
in melodic tunes.
Voice floating gone,
upon air balloons.

Write me a story,
to tell me of you.
I want to know,
what you have gone through.
Bleeding through a pen,
in rainbow infused ink.
Emotions spread on paper,
in only a blink.

Dance me a performance,
majestic in silence
Even if you fall down once,
there will be no absence.
You'll stand back up,
in ballet slippers.
Finish the dance,
with courage sparkles.

Show me your pain,
with crystal tears.
I'll try to help,
chase away fears.
Show me your scars,
all across your wrists.
I know inside you,
deep fear exists.
Show me the bruises,
from where you were hit.
These past few years,
the path was unlit.
Show me your smile,
the one that you fake.
Tell me about,
all the times that you ache.
Reach out for my hand,
so I can help you escape.
And someday I promise,
you'll again be awake.

Glitter swirls,
rainbow twirls,
luminous pearls,
ballet whirls.

Reviews

[Chris]

Well written piece. I'm one who loves a poem with a good flow tied in with rhymes, and this flows fluidly where hardly if not any abrupt stops exist.

I also appreciate how you never stray away from your initial train of thought.

Well done.

[RedInk524]

Wow. Very good. One thing really stood out for me.

Sing me a song,
to scream out your heart.
So powerful that
it tears the world apart.

Considering how badly i hate this world and how badly i need to vent, this is something i would passionately do.
Very good poem. Favorite.

[brenda]

such a beautiful that rhymes really god and tells a lot poem!!

[Jess Holden]

very beautiful :) that is all that can possibly said for your beautiful words

[Spiral Panda]

Going in my notebook by your others I re-read.

[CharlesMonroe]

This is soo...amazing. It's incredibly beautiful. The imagery it created is indescribable, I got totally lost in it. I fell in love with this within the first few lines. Amazing (:

[Kesha]

wow i absolutely loved this poem! it was almost like you were describing my life xD anyways wonderful job!

[Alicia Hirshey]

I am in love with this. It is a good way to let people know that you are there for them. You are a great person and an amazing friend.

[☯]

I absolutely adored reading this! I can imagine all the colors and darkness flowing from the words and I especially liked the last and first stanza.
"Glitter swirls,
rainbow twirls,
luminous pearls,
ballet whirls."
Amazing job! :)