rose, ohh! blows me off..

rose, ohh! blows me off..

A Poem by Surbhi Khandelwal

beautiful comparison between rose and girl..

Alluring and Enthralling beauty
reminds me of your glory!
redden as rouge
flush me, suffuse!
rose, ohh! it blows me off..

Delicate and dazzling petals
just like your skin, soften
people call it a symbol of 'love'
but for me, a symbol of 'you'
ohh this rose, drags me to you....!!

Rain drops on your face
just like dew drops in pace
on petals, going to stake
right through my heart, and attack
ohh this rose, really blows me off!!

Petals falling in breeze
just like your hair, ohh it made me freeze
exquisite and mesmeric
you are just ravishing
ohh this rose...

TO every rose, I smell
reminds me of your perfume, again and again
Its my pain, how can I explain
girl, am going through hell
because it's rose, which blows me off!!

Whenever I bring it you
my heart, smash into you
and when you react, ohh dear
I only wish..."could i have this kiss FOREVER"??

© 2013 Surbhi Khandelwal

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lovely poem!! hats off! :)

Posted 9 Years Ago

nice read, indeed.....with all romantic flavor....."but for me, a symbol of 'you'....".....I love this line...

Posted 9 Years Ago

There is something about that one special kiss, that we all hope will never end. Very nice.

Posted 9 Years Ago

oweee cute and romantic...Great going

Posted 9 Years Ago

A good concept, well written.

Posted 9 Years Ago

Lost in love. Seems a pure emotion of a 'Hopeless Romantic', are you? :)

Good read :)

Posted 9 Years Ago

women and roses both have thorns!!!

Posted 9 Years Ago

Shivam Murari

9 Years Ago

ha! how didn't I notice that? :D
A sweet write, the rose is always worth time and feeds the muse of life, Beautiful imagery!!!

Posted 9 Years Ago

Surbhi Khandelwal

9 Years Ago

Thank you so much..i am humbled :)

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Added on March 8, 2013
Last Updated on April 29, 2013
Tags: rose, girl, hair, breeze, kiss
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Surbhi Khandelwal
Surbhi Khandelwal

jaipur, rajasthan, India

umm, i cant help myself...spilling on pages...when thoughts block my mind...the more i write..the more i think...and more i smile..:) more..


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