rose, ohh!..it blows me off..

beautiful comparison between rose and girl..

Alluring and Enthralling beauty...:)
reminds me of your glory!
redden as rouge...:)
flush me, suffuse!
rose, ohh it blows me off...:)  ;)

Delicate and dazzling petals...
just like your skin, soften...:)
people call it a symbol of 'love'.....
but for me, a symbol of 'you':)!
ohh this rose, drags me to you....!!:)

Rain drops on your face...;)
just like dew drops in pace.....
on petals, going to stake...
right through my heart, and attack....:P
ohh this rose, really blows me off!!

Petals falling in breeze...
just like your hair, ohh it made me freeze...:P
exquisite and mesmeric...
you are just ravishing....:):)
ohh this rose...ahhh!;)

TO every rose, i smell...
reminds me of your perfume, again and again...:)
Its my pain, how can i explain...:(
girl, am going through hell...;)
because it's rose, which blows me off!!

Whenever i bring it you...
my heart, smash into you....:) :)
and when you react, my dear...
i only wish..."could i have this kiss FOREVER"??

Reviews

[Divya Punjabi]

lovely poem!! hats off! :)

[Introspective Mind]

nice read, indeed.....with all romantic flavor....."but for me, a symbol of 'you'....".....I love this line...

[Jack...]

There is something about that one special kiss, that we all hope will never end. Very nice.

[Hiral]

oweee cute and romantic...Great going

[Ency Bearis]

A good concept, well written.

[Shivam Murari]

Lost in love. Seems a pure emotion of a 'Hopeless Romantic', are you? :)

Good read :)

[Mike Emil]

HAI!!!
women and roses both have thorns!!!

[Shivam Murari]

ha! how didn't I notice that? :D

[Souladareatease]

A sweet write, the rose is always worth time and feeds the muse of life, Beautiful imagery!!!

[Surbhi Khandelwal]

Thank you so much..i am humbled :)