Love At First Sight!

Love At First Sight!

A Poem by Surbhi Khandelwal

This HEART cry your name, and never forget the same!!


Summer Rains and Winter Heat

You are the reason I Breathe..

You are the Song in the car..

I keep singing , so far…


Your hands are tied,

Entangled in mine…

Streets are cold, we walk and walk

And talk these talks and talk some more….


You have Everything,

I cannot live without…

You are the dying man’s last words,

I cannot smile without!


In your arms i forget to Woe..

On your lap my Lids get close….

And your uptight Stare,

Ahh! I can see through my Hair..:)


You are broken Heart’s band-aid..

I am your Moth drawn to the flame

You are my Line of Sight..


© 2013 Surbhi Khandelwal

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Love at first sight :) I fell in love with your is splendid :)

Posted 9 Years Ago

There is such a lively passion that flows in the emotions, the words, the colors... all have such a vibrance of life that love alone can bring!

Posted 9 Years Ago

Romantic and passionate piece.
Read and thought how loving one's thoughts might be expressed.

Posted 9 Years Ago

Very Nice and written with all heart.

Posted 10 Years Ago

Beautifying an article or poem is an art itself, only a true artist can do that. And you are a true artist. Very well written poem with proper formatting and decoration.

Keep entertaining...

Posted 10 Years Ago

Surbhi Khandelwal

10 Years Ago

thanku so much for stopping by! :)
A very cute poem... Kudos!

Posted 10 Years Ago

Very beautiful. Really enjoyed it. Nice sentence construction and rhyme scheme. Takes me into all together a different world. Thank you for sharing this

Posted 10 Years Ago

There are some lovely ideas in this one, and some very original images "you are a broken heart's band-aid" and "I am your moth drawn to the flame"--both really great lines. Overall, I think if you pumped up the word choice a little more and some of the phrasing, this would be stellar. Overall, nicely done.

Posted 10 Years Ago

Awhhh so lovely! It is sweet. Good job.

Posted 10 Years Ago

lovely expression of love at first sight adorned with the innocence of a first love/ infatuation... keep up the good work :)

Posted 10 Years Ago

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41 Reviews
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Added on April 24, 2013
Last Updated on April 24, 2013
Tags: rain, song, heart, love, woe, hair, stare, sight, lids, lap, arms


Surbhi Khandelwal
Surbhi Khandelwal

jaipur, rajasthan, India

umm, i cant help myself...spilling on pages...when thoughts block my mind...the more i write..the more i think...and more i smile..:) more..


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