Love At First Sight!

This HEART cry your name, and never forget the same!!

Summer Rains and Winter Heat

You are the reason I Breathe..

You are the Song in the car..

I keep singing , so far…

 

Your hands are tied,

Entangled in mine…

Streets are cold, we walk and walk

And talk these talks and talk some more….

 

You have Everything,

I cannot live without…

You are the dying man’s last words,

I cannot smile without!

 

In your arms i forget to Woe..

On your lap my Lids get close….

And your uptight Stare,

Ahh! I can see through my Hair..:)

 

You are broken Heart’s band-aid..

I am your Moth drawn to the flame…

You are my Line of Sight..

You are my LOVE AT FIRST SIGHT!! J

Reviews

[minnie:)]

Wow his is very good :) I loved it:)

[Surbhi Khandelwal]

Thanks allot minnie... :)

[Leslie Philibert]

Fine write, a poem that explodes with youth and energy !

[Surbhi Khandelwal]

Thanks for the stunning review sir :)..its good to hear you !

[brucethemaster]

This was an amazing poem.

[Surbhi Khandelwal]

thank you bruce :)

[brucethemaster]

You're welcome.

[kk]

Good one....keep writing

[Surbhi Khandelwal]

Sure, thank you! :)

[Lee Rhodes]

oooh that is beautiful! Parts of your poem made my brain question what you were trying to say, but hey its your own poem and you can do whatever you'd like with it :)

[Avocations of Amber]

This is very endearing and full of youthful bliss.....good write... :)

[Surbhi Khandelwal]

I appreciate your comment...thank you friend :)

[TL Boehm]

You'e the song in the car. I especially like that line

[Surbhi Khandelwal]

aww thank you dear...
thanks for stopping by :)

[Sami Khalil]

I agree with the other reviewers . A sweet poem...:)

[Surbhi Khandelwal]

thanks again sami :)

[Sami Khalil]

You are welcome...:)

[Talal Hussain]

That is such a sweet composition..loved it Surbhi :-)

[Surbhi Khandelwal]

thanks a tonne, talal :)

[Zoe Marie Ross]

Great hopeful poem about love. Well done :)