Why?

Just a scribble..

Why is it so?..
A Depressed heart weighs more than a smile on a pretty face,
There is no destination for flowing tears from a bleeding heart,
No cavalry to win over own emotions,

 Haha! Oh dear, for every being here, no peace and no ease..

What a creation it is....

Author's Note

Scribbled lines may be or may not be worthy at all..

Reviews

[Wajiha Nayeem]

so true suryaa.....nicely penned!!

[Surya]

Thank you so much Wajiha...:)

[barleygirl]

In a way, here's how I read you . . . being depressed seems to come so "easily" . . . but being happy takes EFFORT! We need to vow to find the brighter side of things every day rather than let the CRAP of life buffet us around, huh? *smile*

[Surya]

Haha, Yeah, effort is needed and we have to find a brighter side..Thank you Margie for your kind visit..:)

[Zephyr]

Your scribbled lines are truly worthy.
Its so true that it is hard to win over emotions. Keep writing 😊

[Surya]

Thank you Naat for your kind visit, will reflect soon...:)

[Mr.Writer]

Wow... this is so true! It's a short and sweet write Surya :) Sorrows may change to happiness soon

[Surya]

Haha, just waiting for that day...
Well, Thank you Shaan for your kind visit..:)

[Mr.Writer]

No problem! :)

[Great Aunt Astri]

What an inspired poem! It is not just a scribble, it is a MEDITATION. And what is more it sounds as if itcomes straight from the heart.
I have been inspired to read more of your work.

[Surya]

Yup, straight from heart..Am glad for your words...hope you enjoy all of them..Keep visiting..:)..Thank you..:)

[Great Aunt Astri]

I will, I wll, I will, I will!

[JessyJacob]

But it looks some kind of fun with true beings, when you get a time to relieve, and others take advantage of it, saying i must be the true bearer of your love, as in first come first serve.

Heart is place of emotions, brain is place of making ethical thinking, person reacts to both only when both works together. And we separate our own body saying that is heart , this brain, and this is me bearing the pain.

This poetry written long back, but if we clear out missunderstandings of our beings then no need to bear pain, no need to get pain even to smile.

Please dont missunderstand my thoughts. Everyone's life is precious, there is nobody made wrong while borning, we just turn ourself to worthless and precious as per our needs.

[Surya]

Nothing wrong you said...yeah it's precious....Thank you Jessy for your kind review..:)

[Johnny Dep]

It's Worthy my friend..Keep Sharing.

[Surya]

Thank you Johnny..:)

[emmajoy]

Maybe perpetual thoughts about a depressed broken heart weighs heavy.. the more we think the more we layer more 'paint' or veils or darkness. Whereas smiles come from the heart, they twinkle, they glide.. we feel right, relaxed, at peace. Methinks it's up to each to decide which to have and act accordingly whenever possible. Not always possible but...

[Surya]

Not always possible but we have to think for our good, Thank you for your kind and warm words...keep visiting...:)

[JessyJacob]

I think so, because people with heart of richness only can bear pain, others weak hearted gets burden of pain and just smiles. Time and destiny makes the person to get what he needs, this would be only a soul's needs, though we suffer pain blaming fate and God, for bad fortune in past, never happy with present life, always trying to curse the people beside, I missed it, i am unlucky, still bearing the pain. But there will be certainly a time, where everyone will know who loves you, that everything happens for our true happiness of soul and body.

Hope dont missunderstand my writings, it may look some kind of harshness, and sharp knife where it just cuts even if you touch it.

[Surya]

Haha, you said that?, haan no knife in your words instead i found a puece of chalk teaching me worthy lessons..

[JessyJacob]

Hhhmm, am I looking like a teacher? really learning worthy lessons from me? whoever is commenting me, I thought they are getting angry over me I thought?

Why do you write so deep emotions then, I think you just write to ping and pull the leg. Is it? why are you laughing then?

[Surya]

It's nothing personal to get angry, and whoever says words to me I feel them as teacher for minutes....I just write words may be they are emotional, I just write for my happiness according to moods and surroundings and morover my heart and brain.....I usually smile, everytime I suppose...That's it...no angry on anyone, it's their perception towards me not mine...:)

[JessyJacob]

But it looks your perception, disturbing for readers, looking at your feelings, how could someone get hurt that badly, looked very deep, so thought of saying there is no need to write that deeply, hurting yourself and readers, in a way going off track, like a runaway train, which is not stopping but may get exploded if not stopped, if you are not in right hands to stop that train.

[emmajoy]

Excuse me, may I continue what I was trying to say: what I 'said' was kindly meant, truly. It's too easy to be misunderstood, then to be left wondering what to do to remedy a mistake. Sometimes laughing at self makes for a calmer atmosphere and from a calmer mind. Feeling a touch of joy is better - far better - that a touch of dread. Guess we each have to choose which.

[Surya]

Haha, Emma there is no such thought from yours that makes me disturb, every reader has their own perception..Jessy was trying to say about my poem....Sorry Emma, nothing wrong with your review....Keep encouraging, reviewing my works..Thank you..:)

[Surya]

Your words are kind and a thanks for them...Hope the same to continue...Thank you, Emma..

[emmajoy]

Waving, just looking in to see if all's quiet!

[Surya]

Yep..all's good..:)

[Broken Hearts]

Way too much truth behind this. Love it!

[Surya]

Thank you, am glad you liked it...

[Taz]

This touched me in a way. It is most definately something that is part of something great.

[Surya]

Thank you so much....keep visiting...:)