Adieu To Poet's Swords...

Adieu To Poet's Swords...

A Poem by Surya
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swords--Emotions..

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Elite heart with caravan of words
A soul reflecting mighty swords
Journey from dried woods
to perplexion of caravan books

Hearty words left unsaid
drops of tears left wounded
A piece of paper had fallen
in a poetic soul of a land unseen

Destiny driven grandeur of life
Poetic beauty filled a soul
Swords as words stabbed a heart
many emotions postered applauds

Clinch of thirst to rhyme a word
Made a man from mad to kill a sword
Insane voice turned to sane in words
Driven apart from asylum full of swords..

© 2017 Surya


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Good comparison of all the ways words can be like a weapon or feel like stabbing. Some poets are particularly ensconced in the heartbreak aspects of life, so I find myself not really wanting to go there as a reader, but sometimes it's irresistible, the draw of the heartbroken poets.

Posted 2 Years Ago


Your words are surely mightier than the sword sir, perfectly penned...

Posted 2 Years Ago


Surya

2 Years Ago

Thank you so much sir...am delighted...:)
=>you already had me at the first two lines.
"Elite heart with caravan of words
A soul reflecting mighty swords"
what a powerful write.

Posted 2 Years Ago


Surya

2 Years Ago

Thank you for your kind visit and words...:)
L.C. Jarrette

2 Years Ago

always a pleasure to read other writer's great work
"Swords as words stabbed a heart many emotions postered applauds" I loved these lines a lot...as usual awesome one surya Ji

Posted 2 Years Ago


Surya

2 Years Ago

Thank you so much Pragya for your kind visit and words.....am glad you liked it...:)
Destiny driven grandeur of life... Hah... An assaulting post of metaphors galore... Damn good ones I might add... Excellently penned...

Posted 2 Years Ago


Surya

2 Years Ago

You did added actually......Thank you Silente for your kind words...:)
Silente-Write

2 Years Ago

My pleasure, friend...
This is really interesting and powerful Surya:)
Also, this is very innovative work.
Thanks for sharing this!!

Posted 2 Years Ago


Surya

2 Years Ago

Thank you for your kind visit and words Neetha..am glad you enjoyed it...:)
touching write,the sword and the paper,weapons of a poet

Posted 2 Years Ago


Surya

2 Years Ago

Haha, They are....Thank you Wordman..:)
I like how you opened and closed this piece Surya.
It's an intense piece. Lots of swashbuckling metaphors and what seems to be a temporary resolution to the speaker's woes. Immersive writing.

Posted 2 Years Ago


Surya

2 Years Ago

Thank you Tony for your kind visit and words...am glad you liked it...:)
What a great use of alliteration. Loved it. I liked what you did with words here. Words have profound thoughts.

Posted 2 Years Ago


Surya

2 Years Ago

Thank you for your words Saher....am glad you liked it...:)
Najam Us Saher

2 Years Ago

You're most welcome. ☺
This reminds me of someone reading different books going on a new adventure and it sparks an interest in writing poetry.

I'm sure this piece and a deeper more personal meaning but those are my thoughts.

Posted 2 Years Ago


Surya

2 Years Ago

Yeah it has....Thank you for your kind visit and words...am glad for them..:)

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