Bella'e Of Flower...

Bella'e Of Flower...

A Poem by Surya

Like a blossomed red
It was so pure,
That smile of lillies
Led my heart to adore.

Was so brave to fight a bear
To win a thread for her
For those occult eyes to
Glow a rain of tender flights.

Nothing was mine till her
Then the rest of my world
Was bestowed by her just with
A spark in her lurking eyes!

© 2018 Surya


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Love the poem... It was really beautiful! Especially the "Was so brave to fight a bear, to win a thread for her." part. :)

Posted 2 Years Ago


Surya

2 Years Ago

Thank you..:)
First of all, I haven't seen much of you on this website lately & I missed reading you. I'm glad you read requested me. This is one of the best of yours that I've read. Your word-crafting is highly unique & full of surprising imagery that seems perfect after I get over the jolt of seeing words put together in the fresh ways that you do it. This really has flow & feeling (((HUGS))) fondly Margie

Posted 3 Years Ago


Brilliant work Surya...
Very well crafted piece..
Choice of words is really soothing to ears...
Loved to read..

Posted 3 Years Ago


A wonderful poem shared my friend. Gentle, worthwhile words made the reader believe and see eyes. Thank you Surya for sharing the amazing poetry.
Coyote

Posted 3 Years Ago


the middle stanza is brilliant.
The whole poem is beautiful to read.
Keep on writing.:)


Posted 3 Years Ago


nice to read positive poems about love...and that will to feel it with all our hearts---regardless of what comes back to us.

Posted 3 Years Ago


I loved the first stanza... Feels so eternal... The story you've shown here through this poem is really nice! I loved it.

Posted 3 Years Ago


You made me feel the warmth and passion. Beautifully written with delicate usage of words.

Posted 3 Years Ago



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Added on February 11, 2018
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Hyderabad, India



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