Quixotic tale

Quixotic tale

A Poem by Surya

pondered a glimpse
on cellestial beauty
all those stars were mere
lolls next to a caring gaiety

harangues' of delusions
miserably jotted lines
of bewildered emotions to
a quixotic fantasy, that might
be our story which
I sing as a song
in an opera of house where you
and only you as millions of
butterflies fly around me

A wand and a flute
quoted with a quilt
to write a line so eloquent
that i daresay an end

© 2018 Surya

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I read the book last week again. I enjoyed your poetry also. I would like to do another grand adventure. Thank you my friend for sharing your amazing poetry and your thoughts.

Posted 8 Months Ago

science and nature blended together to create a magical sight.. music and songs to express the feel... beautiful lines truly quixotic... a tale that reminds of magical beauty that is beyond imagination.

Posted 2 Years Ago

WOW! What an imaginative assortment of ideas & imagery! Stars, delusions, celestial, butterflies and flutes . . . so many popping word choices to spice up your quixotic trail! This reminds me of the magic one can find in the wild spots hiding in one's imagination! (((HUGS))) Fondly, Margie

Posted 2 Years Ago

a good start and a beautiful end...It was hence a quixotic tale.
keep writing dost :))

Posted 2 Years Ago

well,that would be a great line indeed

Posted 2 Years Ago

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Added on December 21, 2018
Last Updated on December 21, 2018



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A pen, A paper can do wonders.....I hope. more..

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