Blind Date

Blind Date

A Poem by SuzieQ

I finally decided to give up on fate.

Agreeing with my sister to go on a blind date.

Just finishing my makeup and I'm ready to go.

Off to meet him to have dinner and a show.

I'm fidgety, nervous and I think I might be sick.

She said he's handsome and his name is Rick.

But these butterflies in my stomach, they won't go away.

What happens if I'm with him and have nothing to say?

Trying to take a deep breaths to calm myself down

Now I'm wondering if his eyes are blue, green or brown.

Driving in the car and my hands start to sweat

Thinking what if he doesn't like me so I'm starting to fret.

Oh help me just get through this stressful night.

I am at the restaurant and he is now in my sight.

He's so handsome and gorgeous as far I as I can see.

The butterflies are fluttering and I think they want free.

But it is now that he's smiling that I am completely in awe.

His whole face lights up and I see not one single flaw.

The butterflies can be let go and now are released.

I really like this new man and my worries are ceased.

© 2013 SuzieQ


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You hold his hand--- he sweats
He tries to kiss her----she giggles
She toys with her dessert----he wants to go
He Sweats
She Sweats
I love your story/poem, but would never attempt
such an adventure-----Get aquainted first.
------Eagle Cruagh


Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

lovely stuff lady :)

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

SuzieQ

8 Years Ago

Thank you Luke!! I always love comments made by you!!
Luke L

8 Years Ago

you're most welcome
Oh yes I remember those butterfly in the stomach days...I never had a great
blind date ..haa
Nicely done...SyberRose

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Your fear is gone.
You have won.
Very sweet piece with amazing rhyming.
I congratulate you,Suzie!!!

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

zainul

8 Years Ago

I am glad to know that the date was imaginary.
What extremes may be encountered in a blind dat.. read more
SuzieQ

8 Years Ago

I've never really dated. I my husband when I was 15. We did break up for a while when I was 22 but.. read more
zainul

8 Years Ago

You have an exceptional experience regarding dating.
You are also very intelligent to differen.. read more
sometimes we just have to take a chance...never know but it might turn out this good.

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

SuzieQ

8 Years Ago

Yes, that is true! Thank you for reading and commenting!

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