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A Poem by SweeTLoU

We push and we pull
We give and we take
We torment loved ones
To the point that they break
We break all the rules
Instead of behave
Thinking were in control
But becoming a slave
Controlled by a feeling
A sickness within
Forsaking our faith
To replace it with sin
Yet no matter what
We say we can change
But doing what's right
just feels So strange
Good things can happen
When your finally through
When we stop telling lies
Our dreams can come true
So for better or worse
It's time to move on
Playtime is over
Playmates are gone
If you give it your all
You can live like no other
I know it's hard to believe
But we do recover.....

© 2014 SweeTLoU

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Was quite fun to read, the rhymes and flow are super great, while making one reflect on how true the words are and how we are so we. Nice work.

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Added on November 11, 2014
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I love music i love playing guitar, jammin tunes anything from metal to country, most of the stuff i write is addiction or recovery based. if it helps anyone else thats great but i just write to clear.. more..

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