Think It's Funny.

Think It's Funny.

A Poem by Lovelylies;
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Sequel to the first poem I posted.

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It's funny how I can forgive the worst,
But I can't forget the rest. 
It's not too much, it's not enough,
I tried my best to tough it out,
But I can't just let this rest. 
This feel screams, it shouts
Building from inside my chest. 
It's a hard life, I know it's rough,
I paid the price but it's not the first. 
Bet you think it's funny 
Oh I bet you think it's funny 
You left my heart in a bathroom stall, 
But I left your number on the bathroom wall. 

© 2011 Lovelylies;


Author's Note

Lovelylies;
I forgive myself.

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Very clever ending and full of fire. well done.

Posted 12 Years Ago


Sad and angry,but I like the feistiness. The last line seems hopeful to me. The raw emotions of this piece are outstanding! Bravo!

Posted 13 Years Ago



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