Butterfly Dreams

Maked up gone along.

My dreams are like Butterflys,

Flitting to and fro.

Blues and Greens.

Reds and Golds.

 

My butterfly dreams,

Dance around my head.

Romance and happiness.

Sadness and Death.

 

Author's Note

RANDOM!!!!!!!!!!!!

Reviews

[Bridget Murphy]

It's very beautiful, and even the most random thing can be the most beautiful!!:)

[EMF]

Random? Is there some new meaning of random I don't know. This has a perfect structure and form. Your theme is faultless and never deviated from. A good tight focus. And while on the surface it is light and floaty, look a little harder and it sums up the nature of dreams. Transient things that make little sense but can be enjoyed for their own sake. Maybe I'm reading more into it than I should, but I found it a lovely piece. A true joy to discover by accident.

[Sarah]

Indeed very random but it is nice. very short and sweet

[Priscilla Sayers]

may have been random but still nice and whimsical:)

[PrincessZeldaWannabe]

Really sweet and colorfully written!

[Shattered Dreams]

This is so sweet. I love it, and I love all of the words you used to discribe the butterflys. It's a good write, and I urge you to keep going.
Good work and well done!