Butterfly Dreams

Butterfly Dreams

A Poem by Alys Jackson
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Maked up gone along.

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My dreams are like Butterflys,

Flitting to and fro.

Blues and Greens.

Reds and Golds.

 

My butterfly dreams,

Dance around my head.

Romance and happiness.

Sadness and Death.

 

© 2011 Alys Jackson


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Alys Jackson
RANDOM!!!!!!!!!!!!

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It's very beautiful, and even the most random thing can be the most beautiful!!:)

Posted 8 Years Ago


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Random? Is there some new meaning of random I don't know. This has a perfect structure and form. Your theme is faultless and never deviated from. A good tight focus. And while on the surface it is light and floaty, look a little harder and it sums up the nature of dreams. Transient things that make little sense but can be enjoyed for their own sake. Maybe I'm reading more into it than I should, but I found it a lovely piece. A true joy to discover by accident.

Posted 8 Years Ago


Indeed very random but it is nice. very short and sweet

Posted 8 Years Ago


may have been random but still nice and whimsical:)

Posted 8 Years Ago


Really sweet and colorfully written!

Posted 8 Years Ago


This is so sweet. I love it, and I love all of the words you used to discribe the butterflys. It's a good write, and I urge you to keep going.
Good work and well done!

Posted 8 Years Ago



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Alys Jackson
Alys Jackson

Abbeville, LA



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My full name is Alys Jasmina Jackson and I am 18 years old. My Mom died December 2012 so my Dad brought the pair of us back home from Milton Keynes, England, to Abbeville, Louisiana. If there's one .. more..

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