Sweet Temptation

Sweet Temptation

A Poem by SyberRose

 

You portray sweet temptation


behind the bedroom of your smile

 


Violet-blue eyes surrender


 to the needs of a foggy night

 


As you cast your shadow


over the body of a one night stand;

 


Feeding my starvation


 succulent grapes of wine;


flowing vineyards of desire,


I know I'll thirst for you again.

 

©SyberRose

 

© 2013 SyberRose


Author's Note

SyberRose
thank you for reading.

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the first two lines of this are absolute solid platinum...gold wishes it were this good. i get the impression of a brief yet memorable tryst, but it is drowning in gorgeous metaphor and delicate imagery. this is a beautiful regret penned into a resonant memory of exquisite pulchritude.

Posted 7 Years Ago


SyberRose

7 Years Ago

Thank you quin...a foggy memory...I can't remember ha:)
quinfinn

7 Years Ago

i have some of those.....you're welcome
I loved the deep meaning in this poem and loved ho with so few words you can create a composite meaning like this!

Posted 7 Years Ago


SyberRose

7 Years Ago

Thank you so much Ashley...nice to hear from you...and thanks
for peeking in...Rose
DeletedAccount156

7 Years Ago

Your welcome my friend!!!!!!! :) :) :)
I understand your meaning of bitter-sweet yearnings, lusting for something you know you'll just want more of, but hate yourself for wanting it.

Posted 7 Years Ago


SyberRose

7 Years Ago

yes I guess so ha...thanks for peeking in Soma...yes I hardly ever write happily ever after poems ha.. read more
Soma-ko

7 Years Ago

No problem, its only natural for us to mingle within the sea of people, and those who approach you f.. read more
SyberRose

7 Years Ago

thanks...yes your right.
'Violet-blue eyes surrender
to the needs of a foggy night'

i liked this- very romantic, bitter, bitter sweet. fantastic.

Posted 7 Years Ago


SyberRose

7 Years Ago

Thank you for peeking in this morning...glad you enjoyed...Rose
Oooo... This was beautify steamy love ;-)

Amazing work lovely :-)

Posted 7 Years Ago


SyberRose

7 Years Ago

Thank you Orlando...So Nice to hear from you as always. @}--,--'- Rose
sweet wine, refreshing so.

Posted 7 Years Ago


SyberRose

7 Years Ago

thank you so much...and for peeking in tonight...Rose
those flowing vineyards of desire are intoxicating...

Posted 7 Years Ago


SyberRose

7 Years Ago

yes they are haa....thanks dear...hug
He does not need foggy nights when he has your sweet temptations. An enchanting write and read...:)

Posted 7 Years Ago


SyberRose

7 Years Ago

haa...thank you Sami...I am happy you enjoyed ...trying to see you thru the fog.
Sami Khalil

7 Years Ago

Hahaha. The sun will come out eventually...lol
Have a great one...:)
Very well written. Romanticism at its best. Great write. :)

Posted 7 Years Ago


SyberRose

7 Years Ago

Thank you so much Bpoet...nice to hear from you tonight...Rose
Ohlala, being sexually naughty is the ultimate temptation. A very hot little write.

Posted 7 Years Ago


SyberRose

7 Years Ago

Thanks Dale...Rock and Roll Cowboy...thanks for peeking in...Rose

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SyberRose

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