Would You?

Would You?

A Poem by SyberRose
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Painting by Billie Feng

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Would you like to spend the night?
listening to the raindrops fall
While the ecstasy of the rain
flows with passion down the wall~
Would you like to spend the night?
wrapped in my love so warm
While the candle flickers with desire
while our shadows tremble in the storm~
Would you like to spend the night?
in our dark wonderland
And the only thing I wear
is just one pearl on a strand~
Would you like to spend the night?
under a canopy of lace
On ivory sheets of satin
in our silhouetted embrace~
©SyberRose

© 2013 SyberRose


Author's Note

SyberRose
Thank you for reading.

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This piece gets an absolute yes, for staying the night from any man who reads it! Awesome piece, Rose.

Posted 10 Years Ago


SyberRose

10 Years Ago

Thank you Poetic heroics...I appreciate your visit...Rose:)
Travis Gibson (poetic heroics)

10 Years Ago

Your work makes it a must to visit.
another rocking one dear.....!!!
well done....!!

Posted 10 Years Ago


SyberRose

10 Years Ago

ha...thanks sweetie...Rose:)
Saumya

10 Years Ago

most welcome, dear....!!!
:)
another sensual piece mrs.rose :) good write ,is that an anime picture you have up their

Posted 10 Years Ago


SyberRose

10 Years Ago

Its a Billie Feng painting...thank you Peter...always appreciate you visit...:)
Peter H

10 Years Ago

its seemed very Japanese to me :) but cool its a pleasure to read your writes :)
SyberRose

10 Years Ago

thank you Peter:)
I would love to spend the night and let dawn rise slowly to the sounds of creatures stirring and stretching to the new day. Take in the last whiff of burnt wick and slowly unveil spent bodies from our entwined satin sheets. The scent of organic java stirs in the French press awaiting to awaken our senses. Bravo my poet, very sensual and breathtaking indeed. I remember fondly those mornings after the evenings before.

Posted 10 Years Ago


SyberRose

10 Years Ago

Thank you so much for that poetic review...which is better than my poem...I do appreciate your kind .. read more
Perfect in mood, tone, and yes if a woman ever put "Would You" this way, I'd desperatley say yes! Lol Some times Ima goofball lol Well Done Rose!

Posted 10 Years Ago


Shaun Payton

10 Years Ago

You are welcome.:) I have a new slogan, "You writem, I readem" Catchy no? Hehe
SyberRose

10 Years Ago

oh no i want to read yours too...:)
Shaun Payton

10 Years Ago

I can readem and writem too:)
Very Sensual Rose. I love the sound of the rain especially on a tin roof. I can imagine it flowing down the walls.

Posted 10 Years Ago


SyberRose

10 Years Ago

I love the rain at night too ...thank you so much for peeking in today...Rose:)
love the pic and love the verse. exquisite and engaging. well done!

Posted 10 Years Ago


SyberRose

10 Years Ago

Thank you Quin for peeking in..and glad you enjoyed the photo too:)
quinfinn

10 Years Ago

always a pleasure, dear Rose
This is so sensual, Rose! Another beautifully written piece. :) Well done!

~ Noodle.

Posted 10 Years Ago


SyberRose

10 Years Ago

Thank you Sye...and thank you for taking time to comment ...hugsss
s y e

10 Years Ago

Anytime. :) hugs.
Another beautifully written sensual piece. Great job, Rose :)
-Riley

Posted 10 Years Ago


SyberRose

10 Years Ago

Thank you for taking time to peek in again today...glad you enjoyed it...:)
"wrapped in my love so warm

While the candle flickers with desire

while our shadows tremble in the storm~"
A very nice and well written poem. Mesmerizing as always ...:)

Posted 10 Years Ago


SyberRose

10 Years Ago

Thank you Sami...so nice hearing from you...and so glad you enjoyed it...:)
Sami Khalil

10 Years Ago

My pleasure...:)

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SyberRose

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