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Operatic Breeze

Operatic Breeze

A Poem by SyberRose

© 2013 SyberRose


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spooky! a howling on steroids :) i think i will stay indoors tonight ;) i especially appreciate the clarinet .. such a sharp but subtle sound ..
E.

Posted 7 Years Ago


VERY well crafted. I enjoyed the use of near rhyme and your images were sharp and vivid. Excellent use of the orchestra. Brava maestra.

Posted 11 Years Ago


SyberRose

11 Years Ago

Thank you so much Steve...i'm happy you enjoyed this piece...Rose:)
From the title, picture, and font choice....to your wording and description this was another amazingly well crafted piece. Dark but enjoyable. "Music in the fog - grand opera of ecstasy, goblins stalking - orchestra of eternity" These lines stood out the most, my favorites. Looking forward to catching up on all your work, as I am quickly becoming a fan of your work.

Posted 11 Years Ago


SyberRose

11 Years Ago

Thank you Traci....I appreciate your visit....Rose:)
Wow! Rose, this is such a powerful write. I loved the wording and description.

"Music in the fog ~ grand opera of ecstasy
goblins stalking ~ orchestra of eternity" ~~ My favourite lines, well done. This was amazing as always.

~ Noodle.

Posted 11 Years Ago


SyberRose

11 Years Ago

thank you dear...happy you enjoyed my dark little piece...Rose:)
Very beautiful read, I enjoyed this.

Posted 11 Years Ago


SyberRose

11 Years Ago

Thank you very much...I'm happy you enjoyed...Rose:)
I liked it a lot. I wish it were a little longer. Fun, imaginative piece.

Posted 11 Years Ago


SyberRose

11 Years Ago

Thank you Armand...I am glad you liked it...I appreciate your comments today...Rose:)
I'm sensing a pattern to your poetry and that pattern is beauty. This, even being a bit dark, is soft and fluent. Somehow you craft words, simple words, words we use everyday into pure, fresh, and absolutely gorgeous poetry. Very nice my friend.

Posted 11 Years Ago


SyberRose

11 Years Ago

Thank you so much Jack...and i'm happy you enjoyed this piece...Rose:)
how i love those beautiful smooth tones of a clarinet... this must be the "phantom of the Opera".. nice poem Rose

Posted 11 Years Ago


SyberRose

11 Years Ago

Thank you Stella...yes me too...I have the cd...thanks for peeking in...Hugss
This made me think of you reflecting on your own thoughts and your own mind. It had touches of mystery, ghoulish echoes and yet a soft ethereal touch.

Posted 11 Years Ago


SyberRose

11 Years Ago

Thank you so much...and for peeking in today...nice to hear from you...Rose:)
First thing I thought of was Phantom upon reading this, love that play, have seen it three times, your poetry weaves a lovely melody around the aura of that magnificence.

Posted 11 Years Ago


SyberRose

11 Years Ago

Yes I love that music too...I have the cd...Glad you enjoyed it Frieda:)

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Added on June 25, 2013
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Tags: dark, syberrose, poem, harmony, winds, darkness, shadows

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SyberRose
SyberRose

VA



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