Language of the Body

His eyes dance like black hollyhocks

within the breeze of his smile;

Delectable skin of tawny sands

glistening like the River Nile~

The language of poetry

"Come body surf with me"

Upon waves of passion

flowing with ecstasy~

The sunset of his lips

umbrella mine from the sun;

Bathing within his ambiance

until our surfing is done~

His body utters poetry

"Come body surf with me."

 

©SyberRose

 

Author's Note

Thank you for reading.

Reviews

[one sky]

His body utters poetry
"Come body surf with me."

The language of the body, the language of soul. Poetry reveals one's soul. I like the image as well as the choice of words. Loved the lines I mentioned above.

[SyberRose]

Thank you Margaux...and for peeking in tonight...Rose:)

[jacob erin-cilberto]

very sensual piece...i love it when people are associated with poems...living is a poem...and we are all words that make up life with our existence.

[SyberRose]

Thank you Jacob for peeking in tonight...Rose:)

[ShelleyA]

Hi Rose. Beautiful... simply beautiful. Heartfelt and romantic expression of love. Delightfully sensual. Vivid imagery. Very nice simile and metaphor. Lovely depth of feeling. Excellent closing lines. Well penned. Write on!

[SyberRose]

Thank you so much Shelly...so nice of you to peek in tonight...I wont make you read anything else today haa;)

[ShelleyA]

I always enjoy reading your poetry, Rose. You're very welcome.

[Rita L. Sev]

"Come body surf with me..." Now there's a line I've never heard... ;) Sensual and unique - nicely done!

[SyberRose]

Thank you again Rita...nice of you to pop in again...:)

[ANTO]

This is a very evocative poem Rose. I like the thought of a lovers body language and poetry being one and the same. Simply sensational.
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[SyberRose]

Thank you Anthony...so glad you enjoyed it...Rose..hugs

[Sarah Conder]

Very sensual and passionate, I love it!

[SyberRose]

Thank you so much Sarah...and for peeking in again today...:)

[Jack...]

She's back from her wild west trip. Beautiful and sensual Rose.

"The sunset of his lips, umbrella mine from the sun" Exquisite my friend. Simply divine.

[SyberRose]

haa...Yes i'm back...thank you Jack...I'm happy you liked it...Rose:)