Fate of Eternity

Fate of Eternity

A Poem by SyberRose


Sands of yesteryear echoing in the wind

Upon shores where invisible footprints wander


And ebony blue waves whisper secrets of lovers past

within the soft vibration of the breeze~

 

Vivacious curves of the hourglass flow

Into the undeniable arms of destiny

 

 

And the haunted ships of forevermore

navigate without a compass in the sea

propelled by the fate of eternity~

 

And the salty perfume of the sea nymphs

lure lonely sailors to their death~

 

 While a message in a bottle

lies upon sea glass shores

            where invisible footprints wander~

 

©SyberRose

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

© 2013 SyberRose


Author's Note

SyberRose
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Epic..!! I adore how you perfectly created such a mystical imagery within this poem. This is a kind of beautiful and haunting fairy-tale like poem. I truly admire your talent..!

Posted 10 Years Ago


SyberRose

10 Years Ago

Thank you so much Shirley...and so nice of you to say...I do appreciate it...:)
Great poem, especially the part about the ships lost at sea, "propelled by the fate of eternity". Brings me images of ghost ships found drifting out on the ocean. The nymphs and how they lure sailors to their death was evocative, especially the phrase about their "salty perfume".

Posted 10 Years Ago


SyberRose

10 Years Ago

Thank you Dan and I appreciate your visit and your nice comments...Rose:)
Another wondrous poem about lost souls who perished along with the mighty ships of the time, in hazardous, treacherous seas ! Or was it the transfixing, hypnotic stare of the mermaid floating on the water's surface nearby, coupled with her haunting song which drove the great schooner unto the unforgiving rocks to it's and her crew inevitable doom ? There souls destined to wander on invisible beaches for evermore !

An haunting story, so vividly and imaginatively described Rose, top write once more.





Posted 10 Years Ago


SyberRose

10 Years Ago

thank you Tom for that awesome review...and thank you again for taking time to visit...Rose:)
Love both picture and piece, both are beautifully done. I love your wording, and how time is but a standstill, a never-ending river that flows from both past, present, and future. Much enjoyed.
-Soma :)

Posted 10 Years Ago


SyberRose

10 Years Ago

thank you and so happy you enjoyed this piece Soma...and thanks for peeking in again today...:)
Soma-ko

10 Years Ago

You're welcome, and I'm glad I came back. I've almost forgotten how eloquent and unique your writing.. read more
SyberRose

10 Years Ago

thank you so much Soma...hugs
Timeless and beautifully written. Captivated by the words woven in this splendid tapestry.

Posted 10 Years Ago


SyberRose

10 Years Ago

Thank you so much Brandon...i'm happy you enjoyed this piece...Rose:)
a beautifully written poem lovely presentation. I rate it high enjoyed very much

Posted 10 Years Ago


SyberRose

10 Years Ago

Thank you Heather...and I appreciate your visit this evening...:)
Such a classy poem, it is always a beautiful site to peek into your heart and mind.

Posted 10 Years Ago


SyberRose

10 Years Ago

Awwww...thank you Dale for that sweet comment...and i'm glad you enjoyed this piece...Rose:)
Interesting and rich. Full as a silk sail. Deep as a Persian carpet. In short superb.

Posted 10 Years Ago


SyberRose

10 Years Ago

Thank you so much Ken for that lovely comment and nice to see you today...Rose:)
This a absolutely lovely! I enjoy the feeling of traveling the world to look for that one thing. I really love "Vivacious curves of the hourglass flow/Into the undeniable arms of destiny".

Posted 10 Years Ago


Oh you know what Rose, lol I could quit writing and just read your fine fine poetry! Lol

P.s Id never stop writing, is a compliment when im in awe:)

Posted 10 Years Ago


SyberRose

10 Years Ago

Well thank you so very much...no we don't want you to stop...you are too good for that. Appreciate t.. read more
Shaun Payton

10 Years Ago

You are quite welcome Rose:) Trying to get back to writing a little.

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Added on August 5, 2013
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SyberRose

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