Guiltless

Guiltless

A Poem by SyberRose

 

 You are in the gazebo of my dreams

                beneath a canopy of mimosa

and you are the light within the moon,

                against whose flame

no winds will prosper~


 

A turbulent sea could never

                shun the echo of the stars

in the luster of night,

                as passion undresses

                                the sarong of a guiltless affair~


 

 The stark nakedness

                of defiance consumes

the glare of reality,

                as my silver tongue unclasps

beads of pearly white~

 

©SyberRose

 

 

 

 

© 2013 SyberRose


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SyberRose
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Wonderful write such with passion.

Posted 10 Years Ago


SyberRose

10 Years Ago

Thank you Ency and nice to her from you this morning...Rose:)
Hi Rose. A lovely write of passion. Heartfelt and romantic. Skillfully crafted free verse which I enjoy. Good imagery, flow and tone. Line to line transition and breaks are done well. Nice rhythm and use of enjambment. Deep expression of emotion; seductive and sensual. Good word choice. Good closing lines. Well penned and a much enjoyed read. Write on!

Posted 10 Years Ago


SyberRose

10 Years Ago

Hi Shelley...nice to see you this morning and thank you for peeking in with that lovely review :)
ShelleyA

10 Years Ago

You're very welcome Rose. Have a great day!
Very nice feel to this poem though I had trouble with the metaphor of your last verse. That said I know from your words -- I read all the poems -- that you are a poet and encourage you to keep on writing!

Posted 10 Years Ago


SyberRose

10 Years Ago

Thank you for peeking in tonight...appreciate it...Rose
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I found this very subtle, suggestive and erotic at the same time, your smooth, delicate crafting of words has delivered a brilliant finished article

Posted 10 Years Ago


SyberRose

10 Years Ago

Thank you so much Bluely for peeking in today...I appreciate it...Rose:)
as passion undresses
the sarong of a guiltless affair~


" The stark nakedness
of defiance consumes
the glare of reality,
as my silver tongue unclasps
beads of pearly white~"

Now this is breathtaking... xo Rose

Posted 10 Years Ago


SyberRose

10 Years Ago

Thank you so much Rose...and nice to see you this evening..hugs
Oh wow Rose, this one was a bit hot to the touch I would say, but still written in your flawless and beautiful style. Once again you amaze me my friend.

Posted 10 Years Ago


Jack...

10 Years Ago

No I didn't but I will go and listen. What was the date of the podcast?
SyberRose

10 Years Ago

todd just added it on friday...episode six
Jack...

10 Years Ago

Ok, I will check it out.
"A turbulent sea could never
shun the echo of the stars
in the luster of night,
as passion undresses
the sarong of a guiltless affair"

A guiltless affair. Such a passionate, well written poem with beautiful imagery that takes me away to another serene place.

Posted 10 Years Ago


SyberRose

10 Years Ago

Thank you again Traci...I do appreciate your visits today...:)
Passionate and amazing poem Rose. ;-)

Posted 10 Years Ago


SyberRose

10 Years Ago

Thank you Red...nice to hear from you tonight as always...:)
loved the poem & Mimosa. Two decided to grow either side of an alcove around my place, where I am enclosed, grand solitude. Think I know you from somewhere in the past. Nice to see others enjoy like me. Syber Rose?, maybe a couple of years ago. I'm in process, fine tuning memory . . Have a hairy flower good evening, in red pink and white, so sweet for the bees and humming birds, and you.

Posted 10 Years Ago


SyberRose

10 Years Ago

Thank you for peeking in...your name doesn't sound familiar though...must have been another Rose.:)
I think the judge might say "Case dismissed! This girl is in her working clothes" - like the lyrics of the famous Patricia the stripper song - no guilt whatsoever.
I liked nakedness of definance - money should always be without clothing

Great poem Rose
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Posted 10 Years Ago


SyberRose

10 Years Ago

Thank you Anthony...x
ANTO

10 Years Ago

Gorgeous profile pic change Rose btw...x
SyberRose

10 Years Ago

thank you...hugs

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Added on August 17, 2013
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