Dream Girl

Dream Girl

A Poem by Javan
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Just a little something I wrote on my lunch break yesterday...

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I threw away my heart,
but she caught it and she'll keep it.
She looked into my eyes
and read my deepest secrets.
To her alone, I expose my soul,
she nursed it's wounds,
and we watched my spirit grow.
My emotional soldier,
My heart stops beating when I hold her,
and I feel hers go double-time
to pick up the slack.
The weight of the world on my shoulders,
but her confidence in me at my back.
If you said she was the girl of my dreams,
you'd be right, because until I find her,
my imagination is where she sleeps.

© 2012 Javan


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Beautiful, very romantic, this piece.
Seems as though you are truly in love
Love always inspires as to write doesn't it?
Another deep emotional write.
Well done :)

Posted 5 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Javan

5 Years Ago

Funnily enough, I wasn't with someone when I wrote this...
I guess it was written from the lov.. read more
cimmy wuv xxxooo

5 Years Ago

Yer sometimes you get so in tune with your heart and what your feeling, that it doesn't matter wheth.. read more
My heart stops beating when I hold her,
and I feel hers go double-time
to pick up the slack.,,,nice line

Posted 7 Years Ago


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Aw, this is so adorable:)
"until I find her, my imagination is where she sleeps"
Wow. aha.. I don't know what to say. I love it :) And you wrote this on your lunch break.. amazing.

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Willowtree

8 Years Ago

Well it worked well, it made the poem sound as if it wasn't quite over yet. Like you were still wait.. read more
Javan

8 Years Ago

It's true, even tho I didn't do it on puropse!
When I do meet her, I'll def write a part 2!
Willowtree

8 Years Ago

I'd love to read it when you do!
Aww...this is an incredibly cute poem, and I love the ending(:

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

damn....this is good. i mean this poem is pretty multi-layered. i mean the girl you describe is perfect but the reality is no girl is that perfect and in a way thats sad. well done, fed my imagination well

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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Javan
Javan

London, Croydon, United Kingdom



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Just another 26 year old with an over-active imagination and a half-decent vocabulary. I started writing just to help me get things off of my chest and out of my mind. It's an escape for me. Been.. more..

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