A Poem by Sylo's Rose

Lost is what I feel when his arms aren't around me.


Hopeless is what i am without his strong hands to guide me.


Searching for the what was lost


What was mine


He was mine...


Untill she came along.


Now there she sits in my life.


I am lost in the forest do to her presence


I have lost all but my fur and fangs


Lost with no hope of return


"Sylo" I hear is voice whisper from behind me


I turn, fur bristled ready to attack


And get lost


Lost in his Golden Eyes


With no hope of return


He reaches for me


And I run


Lost in my own fears


Lost in my own hate

© 2011 Sylo's Rose

Author's Note

Sylo's Rose
this is what hapens to us psycho when we feel hurt and abandoned by our loved ones.

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sad and emotional. amazing poem, and easy to relate to if you ask me.

Posted 8 Years Ago

Very well written and a good read.

Posted 8 Years Ago

i like the way you put yourself into the persona of a she wolf , it is compelling and brilliant. very clever write!

Posted 8 Years Ago

Tragically born to those less fortunate to write in pen, a well versed prose, well done

Posted 8 Years Ago

Great job! I love it!

Posted 8 Years Ago

2 of 2 people found this review constructive.

I like this one. Good job Missa!

Posted 8 Years Ago

2 of 2 people found this review constructive.

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Added on April 15, 2011
Last Updated on May 2, 2011


Sylo's Rose
Sylo's Rose

Neverland, OR

I'm a littel wolf lost in the big forest :( But I love to play and hunt and hang out with my pack mates. I also looooooveeeee to write. Thats why im here. To make friends and share my writings :) more..


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