A Poem by Sylo's Rose

Sitting here waiting for him to come home


Home from a hunt that should never have happened


Home from a place where he surely will end up dead


As I sit here I wonder why?


Why did I let him go?


Why did I not stop him?


Now I sit here and wonder when will he come home or if he will come home.


The sun raises and the sun sets


Sleep is not an option. Food never crossed my mind


On;y him and him not here.


Sun raises and there's a rustle in the trees.


"Wait no more my love. I am here."

© 2011 Sylo's Rose

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This poem seemed sad at first but then there's a happy ending. Nice!

Posted 9 Years Ago

Very nice.

Posted 9 Years Ago

This is really good, and it flows preatty well, but it has some troubles. a couple of places. ... (Now I sit here and wonder when will he come home or if he will come home.) this could be broken down. ... try this.
(Now I sit here and wonder when will he come home.)
(if he will ever come home.)
seperate these two.
(Sleep is not an option.
Food never crossed my mind)
I think they stand on there own.
and take a look at the word ...o;ny, we all do those mistakes we rush and some times not read our sentaces . but i really did like this.
thank you Moon fixer

Posted 9 Years Ago

Touching and thought provoking, well done

Posted 9 Years Ago

Wow! this is wow... amazing

Posted 9 Years Ago

beautiful. this is probably the best you have written in a while. awesome!

Posted 9 Years Ago

Aw i like it! love how mmost of your poemsRE LIKE A STORY!

Posted 9 Years Ago

A wonderful ending to her distress...........

Posted 9 Years Ago

1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

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Added on May 24, 2011
Last Updated on May 24, 2011


Sylo's Rose
Sylo's Rose

Neverland, OR

I'm a littel wolf lost in the big forest :( But I love to play and hunt and hang out with my pack mates. I also looooooveeeee to write. Thats why im here. To make friends and share my writings :) more..