The Hermit

The Hermit

A Poem by Schyala
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My second poem about the hermit, a tarot card representing regrets. Hope you enjoy!

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Regrets.
Piled up in a hoarder's house.
Like heirlooms, passed down from our thoughts.
What we might of thought as intelligent
to leave our harlot mouths
turns into fears of the past

We can remember all do,
and wonder what we could have done
As our eyes look down upon us
And although light sets ahead 
Happiness is in the quest
Our regrets will always follow us
And always remain our pest.

© 2012 Schyala


Author's Note

Schyala
My second poem, about the tarot card the hermit which represents regrets. See the picture to see what it looks like. Hope you enjoy!

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This is going in the library. Regrets are piled high for sure. Thanks for this.

Posted 6 Years Ago


This really high level thinking....
When I see such poetry I get inspired....
The words ring true in my mind....
A really lovely write..

Posted 7 Years Ago


Happiness is in the quest ... Words of wisdom...

Posted 7 Years Ago


i hate regrets. your poem makes regrets sound like something we can defeat. like it.

Posted 7 Years Ago


This is an excellent poem. It suits the subject matter well I think. I like how you described what regrets are in the first few lines. Those are some cleverly weaved words. You shed a good deal of insight into regret with this piece. I wonder perhaps, if you could do something for each Tarot card. That would be a challenge I would think someone with this level of insight would defeat in a most rewarding manner.

Yes, I did enjoy this.

Be well.

-Caradoc

Posted 7 Years Ago


This is a really lovely poem, such good imagery and similes !

Posted 7 Years Ago


I think that was brilliant. Very good poem.

Posted 7 Years Ago


The poem is amazing!
The rhythm is great!
The flow is wonderful!
100/100 is what I want to rate :)

Posted 7 Years Ago



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Schyala

Lakeland, FL



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