Dawn has Fallen

You severed my path and shed the skin away from my bone

a scant lip of blood and tooth perishing between your legs, 

wandering snake tongue, just for a little while.

We tortured one another's light 

playing nightful, at nightfall.

Sweetning the pillows upon which our heads fall;

pull me up and let me spin

in a heavenly wander of this medicine.

Reviews

[Wondering Mind]

I must force myself from imagining this "heavenly wander"

[closed..acct]

This is wonderful,
Such amazing wording through out.
Enjoyed!

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"We tortured one another's light
playing nightful, at nightfall."

. sheer genius ... superbly written ...