THE NEED

THE NEED

A Poem by T

 

 

Kiss me
like you are hungry to reach inside
and draw me into you

Touch me
like you ache to feel me beneath you
and show me your fire

and love me
like you've never loved before
with the measure of your soul

then I will always be yours

 

© 2011 T


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Wow firerie words ! you minx
You keep that up and Terry won't let me read any more of your stuff
BTW... Thank you again for showing me here.

Posted 8 Years Ago


This is so beautiful , sensual poem . :)

Posted 13 Years Ago


An interesting take on conditional love. I have seen a few here and there, but none of them have quite said it like this.

Posted 15 Years Ago


beautiful poem!

Posted 16 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

ahhhhh i love the opening to this...a kiss with depth... to touch you inside... instincual, primal... soul connection... excellent write

Posted 16 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Longing, yearning, passion, hunger ... splendid! xxx

Posted 17 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Your poem burns. But I wonder if love is at all physical? Or is love about perseverence? Is love something so deep that it cannot be seen or felt on a physical plane?

Posted 17 Years Ago


2 of 2 people found this review constructive.

Short and sweet yet big on emotion and want. PERFECT!

Posted 17 Years Ago


2 of 2 people found this review constructive.

this one is aflame with passion. love that ending. keep up the great writes.

Posted 17 Years Ago


2 of 2 people found this review constructive.

Great poem very touching! very romantic and very beautiful! I love it!

Posted 17 Years Ago


2 of 2 people found this review constructive.


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