That One Girl

That One Girl

A Poem by Aurora Dawn
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I am really unsure about this poem. :/

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She is the girl, always letting out a laugh
But you don't even know the half.

Deep inside she feels alone
Hoping her cover will never be blown.

Her only real friends live miles away
Thinking about them day after day
She hates being so alone.

She hides the scars on her hips
Her secrets never leave her lips.

She cries at night
looking for that light
That will guide her back home.

© 2012 Aurora Dawn


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I,to, can relate. For years wondering when I can once again find myself.

Posted 7 Years Ago


I know this feeling. I think a lot of people do. You describe it so well. I wish I could rhyme half as well as you do.

Posted 7 Years Ago


Aurora Dawn

7 Years Ago

Rhyming can be a hard concept. But it gets easier the more you expand your vocabulary. I read half a.. read more
very wonderful written, like the rhyme scheme

Posted 7 Years Ago


very beautifully written, love.

Posted 7 Years Ago


This is really well written, and very sad. Excellent stuff dude : D

Posted 7 Years Ago


tamsin

7 Years Ago

That's cool : D It was a nice read, I hope you will have a look at some of my stuff : D
Aurora Dawn

7 Years Ago

I'll be sure to check some of it out:3
tamsin

7 Years Ago

Cheers dude : D

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Added on October 15, 2012
Last Updated on October 15, 2012
Tags: Scars, pain, that, one, girl, alone, cuts, cry, light, home, friends, need

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Aurora Dawn
Aurora Dawn

Boise, ID



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Hi. I'm Aurora. I just kinda write about anything at any time. If I have an idea I write it down and soon it blossoms. I like writing poetry and short stories mainly. Veni. Vidi. Vici. more..

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