Angel with broken wings

Angel with broken wings

A Poem by Aurora Dawn
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Why does the worst happen to the best?

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You're an angel with broken wings,

You've experianced one million things.

You've been beated and hurt,

Scars hiding under the sleves of your Shirt.

But all the kind you do,

I find it hard to be true.

Somebody so good being hurt so bad,

Just the thought of it makes me mad.

The worst happens to the best,

What about the rest?

The ones who do wrong,

But you are so strong.

You don't deserve the pain,

You're stuck in the chain.

The chain holds you back,

But you will never crack.

You're an angel with broken wings,

You've experianced one million things.

© 2012 Aurora Dawn


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Often these words are not heard as they are held close to the heart. well done!

Posted 2 Years Ago


This is gorgeous! Wow...just truly stunning. You captured the emotion beautifully.

Posted 7 Years Ago


This was an amazing poem. I actually almost cried. It really has deep meaning and is beautiful. You are a very good writer.

Posted 7 Years Ago


Perfect! Just a couple of typos to be fixed up.

Posted 7 Years Ago


I think this was pretty sweet and inspiring especially if aimed towards a person who is going through some kind of hardship. Its short , to the point and easy to interpret. Looks good.

Posted 7 Years Ago


Simply amazing and emotional. I absolutely loved it! :)

Posted 7 Years Ago


experiance=experience...besides that it's truly wonderful. It is emotional but because it is well-written you can pull off that emotion. Well done!

Posted 7 Years Ago


simply wonderful. i must say in my own experience, it seems all the pain makes us stronger and better people for living through the worst. atleast some of the greatest people i know have lived through terrible things. great write

Posted 7 Years Ago


There are a couple misspellings but I'm sure that's due to no fault of your own(: great write, I really liked the feeling of it, and the rhythm of it. You did an amazing job with this, thanks for sharing(:

Posted 7 Years Ago


I think this is one of my favorite poems ever

Posted 7 Years Ago


Aurora Dawn

7 Years Ago

I'm so glad you like it that much!

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Added on October 25, 2012
Last Updated on December 15, 2012
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Aurora Dawn
Aurora Dawn

Boise, ID



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Hi. I'm Aurora. I just kinda write about anything at any time. If I have an idea I write it down and soon it blossoms. I like writing poetry and short stories mainly. Veni. Vidi. Vici. more..

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