Why do You Love me???

Why do You Love me???

A Poem by GummyBear
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Doesnt everyone want to know why there loved in a relationship? I sure do all the time, so i decided to write a poem.

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Why do you love me?
I just dont understand
Look at the way I walk
The way I touch your hand
I know I act a little childish
But thats the way I am
I know you act mature sometimes
But because you're almost a man
I dont think I'm pretty
But you still seem to disagree
I know you wish sometimes
That I could see what you can see
But its hard
To think I look good
When all these years
I've been misunderstood
To stand in the mirror
With the fear of
Your rejection
Because of my reflection
But I finally realized
That to you I was beautiful
It took me a while to notice
That you were being truthful
I dont know what you see in me
Is it because I make you laugh
You know when you're about to break down
That I have your back
You make me laugh too
Although I sound like a geek
I dont like it
But you think it's sweet
And whenever I go through so much pain
You continue to make me smile
No matter how much I lose or gain
Your love will always remain the same
I can be smart
But I also have my dumb days
We also act like kids
When we start to play
I go through drama
I'm all over the place
But as soon as I leave
I only see your face
I dont know what it is
I dont what I do
But as long as you love me
I love you too

© 2011 GummyBear


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This is a great piece of writing. Just... have a bit more self confidence! YOU may think people look at you as average, but so long as YOU know you're more than that, I think that is all that matters. So it is not a question why somebody loves you, but HOW you love yourself.

Posted 12 Years Ago


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Nice thoughts. We are always our own worst critic. We never can understand what people see in us because all we can see is our flaws. Lucky thing others can see our beauty or where would we be then? I enjoyed reading your poem. Congratulations on acceptance to the University of your choice.

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Luo I loved your review. It is really true and well over time I have come to truly love my self. I wrote this poem about 2 or 3 years ago.

Posted 12 Years Ago


This is a great piece of writing. Just... have a bit more self confidence! YOU may think people look at you as average, but so long as YOU know you're more than that, I think that is all that matters. So it is not a question why somebody loves you, but HOW you love yourself.

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

I believe this portrays every woman's thoughts... except for Jessica Alba and Megan Fox, those skinny b*****s.

Anyway, very nice poem. It's really cute. * w *

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

A very sweet poem ......

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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