In My Crazy Little World

In My Crazy Little World

A Poem by GummyBear
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Inspired from Reading a magazine and seeing how so many girls now in days wanna look like a barbie.

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In my own crazy world

There would be no perfect figure

Young women wouldn’t strive

To look like one another

Young souls wouldn’t shatter

In disappointed to

Look like the “Thin”

Beauty would only be found

From within

Super models in our society would be

The mother Teresa types,

So loving, beautiful, and gifted inside.

Too fat…

Too thin…

Too short…

Too tall…

It’s a game we no longer have to play.

If we lived in my crazy world,

Human figures would be

The last talk of the day.

Wearing a bathing suit wouldn’t be as hard as it.

Young women wouldn’t have to

Harm their bodies to please their peers

If we lived in my crazy world,

Here would be no perfect figure

Only perfect love.

© 2011 GummyBear


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I'm with you. Beauty from within is far more enduring and valuable. But there's something to be said about taking good care of the only body you have. I don't like being overweight, and it has led to diabetes and other health problems. Health for health's sake, not trying to be a beauty's sake. You did a good job addressing this issue that haunts many a young person.

Posted 9 Years Ago


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Enjoyed your poem...I think we would all be better off without mirrors ha...

Posted 8 Years Ago


i like your poem.Keep it up! :)

Posted 9 Years Ago


I'm with you. Beauty from within is far more enduring and valuable. But there's something to be said about taking good care of the only body you have. I don't like being overweight, and it has led to diabetes and other health problems. Health for health's sake, not trying to be a beauty's sake. You did a good job addressing this issue that haunts many a young person.

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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