Confiding the Girl Within

Confiding the Girl Within

A Poem by TKBickel

Oh little girl

Deep inside

His eyes see us

We can not hide


Careful little girl

Do not tremble under my skin

He caress our cheek

His loving warmth seeps in


Quickly little girl

Hold my hand

He whispers in our ear a song so sweet

Only love could understand


Maybe little girl

We could let him in

His fingers slide around our heart

Fluttering its beat within


But little girl

What if I am wrong

He now has a strong grip on our heart

Could we survive without his love for long


Hush little girl

Please do not whimper so

His promise will hold true

Forever combining our souls

© 2012 TKBickel

Author's Note

With a little nudge, I stepping out on a poem again.

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A splendid read and write...Thank you for penning...:)

Posted 7 Years Ago


7 Years Ago

Thank you for taking time to read it.
Sami Khalil

7 Years Ago

My pleasure...:).............
Wow, this is a lovely poem.

Posted 8 Years Ago

Love this how you speak to yourself has a vulnerable quality to it.

Posted 8 Years Ago

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beautiful words. enjoyed it.

Posted 8 Years Ago

Enjoyed reading this. Good job.

Posted 8 Years Ago

You did a wonderful job here. I didn't trip up on any of your words and the feel was quite awesome. I love your formatting and I look forward to reading more of your work.

Posted 8 Years Ago

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I just had to come back for another look. I've bought it a lead and a bowl and a basket and arranged with the vet for it to have its shots. It can stay in my room

Posted 8 Years Ago

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And damn glad am I (lapsing into Yoda for a second) that you got the nidge. It's sensational. dark and alive. With strong tones of love and desire. Wonderful. Can I keep it? Can I? Can I? I'll feed it and walk it and everything...

Posted 8 Years Ago

Nicely done and very unique. A young woman talking to the girl within herself about trusting and loving a man, who has a hold on them. An interesting study on a very real and common subject from a different point of view or angle. Well presented and written for a good read. Deftly handled with sensitivity. Well done again.

Posted 9 Years Ago

Your poem is not half bad. In fact it is really good. It tells us the girl is strong and should be true to her feelings. I just had to read it. Awesome write.

Posted 9 Years Ago

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13 Reviews
Shelved in 2 Libraries
Added on March 14, 2012
Last Updated on March 14, 2012
Tags: Love, trust, relationships, poem, commitment




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