Unspoken Love

have you ever felt.... saying everything that you've wanted to say a long time ago.. but you can't just find the right words??

She has misty mole eyes

Her smile captivates everyone

She could be on magazine's cover

A face of perfection, every man's dream.

It's no wonder you like her

She's so kind, so cool to be with

You stare at her with adoration

When she laughs, you can't help but smile.

But...don't you notice?

While you're dying to be with her

I'm here, waiting for my chance

To talk to you

To get your attention.

I know that I'm just a friend

But it's just so hard

For my feelings to be a secret

But for Friendship's sake

I have to.

I can't change this reality

I can't make you love me

Now all that I can do is to mourn

For my impossible chance,

For your desperate affection,

For my unspoken love....

Author's Note

just wrote this out of unbearable sadness and pain. hope you liked it. thanks for reading!! :)

Awards:
*Fourth Jan 20, 2012
Unrequited Love

*Seventh Feb 9, 2012
It's A Love Story, Baby Just Say Yes.

*Good Love Story Apr 27, 2012
Love <3

*Love Poem Merit May 7, 2012
Love Poems

*Honorable Mention May 23, 2013
Poetry Contest

Reviews

[stars are far]

thats very sad :(... and many of us can relate to that..wel done

[Daisie Vergara (Dhaye)]

This is a simple release of your hidden feelings. That's good. This is done last 2011. I hope all is well now. Keep going. :)

[Katelyn]

amazing!!

[Bidu Ibrahim]

Awesome! The pain of loving someone who doesn't know.. Good job Aleisha.

[MAC]

not sure this is a good thing but wow you write pain well. excellent but sad piece!

[Mary C]

A great write ! I enjoyed every bit of it !

[Smiley (:]

I love it! It speaks volumes to every teenage girl's heart that has ever yearned for something that could never be achieved. You go girl [;

p.s. feel free to read my new book! I'm new and I've got no reviews! Thanks!

[Thea]

Aw…That’s really heartbreaking…It made me remember the quote I saw the other day, “Should I smile because he’s my friend? Or cry because that’s all he is?” It’s hard liking a friend because no matter what happens, you always have to choose between love and friendship…You’ve penned wonderful and deep emotions on this piece…Well done! :)))

[Alexis]

I completely understand what you're saying here. I'm in a similar position right now, just not as severe. It's so terrible when you love someone and they don't love you back. And especially when it's a friend and you fear that you'll ruin the friendship if you tell them. That has happened to me before, I'll be honest. But him not being friends with me anymore because of that shows that perhaps he was never really a true friend. Or else he just didn't know what else to do. I can understand where it'd be awkward, but I think that if they really want to keep being friends with you, they'll tell you kindly they don't feel the same but that they still want to be friends. That's how I wish things would go; obviously they rarely do. I've only seen it happen once. Well, anyways, I'm ranting. Sorry about that. You did a really great job on this. I liked it a lot. You didn't sugarcoat it, you just left it at simple truth; which is good. I hope that someday soon, he'll realize you've just been waiting and waiting for a chance to talk to him and have his attention. I'm sure you deserve it. :) Great write!

[Me]

great write !