Chapter 1 - The Legend of the Twenty Million Platinum man.A Chapter by TOF_MattIn a world where Fate takes the form of a massive of weave of threads connecting everyone and everything, Noal Kai races to find an answer to why his mere existence throws all of destiny into chaos.
Previous Version This is a previous version of Chapter 1 - The Legend of the Twenty Million Platinum man.. Chapter 1 The Legend of the Twenty Million Platinum man. Ella Gant turned the busted tail pipe over her mouth and a
solitary water droplet slid down and teased her from the rim. She shook it free but it all but evaporated
by the time it reached her tongue. “WATER” she cried, as she dragged
her body across the sand like a dried-out slug.
“I can feel it! We’re done
for! No miracle rescue for us this
time!”
She tossed the twisted hunk of metal away and then fell to the ground in a plume of dust. A few feet behind her, twenty-one-year-old Noal Kai was still scratching his head and looking back at the smoldering wreckage of what was once their ride. “I just don’t understand it. It was a steamobile. It runs on water! How could it have caught fire?” he asked aloud. “Really? Out of everything that’s happened in the last two weeks, that’s the part you don’t understand!?” Ella buried her head in the desert sand, reducing the rest of her complaints to inaudible muffles. Just how long had they been out here anyway? Even with the car, Noal had figured they’d be goners by day two, but here they were on what must’ve been day four; or was it five? Maybe Fate really was helping them out. He took pause at that thought and squinted over the horizon, but the golden thread continued to stretch onward into infinity. Fate, help him? It was official; the heat was making him
delusional. “Hey,
come on. We gotta keep moving,” he urged
to Ella, who was now slumped over a rock several feet away. “Hey, didn’t you hear me? I said we have to go! No?
Fine, I guess I’m just going on without you. You hear me Ella? This is me walking away now… You hear that Ella? Ella?” The only response he got was her short emerald hair whisking in the desert breeze. This was a trick; it had to be. If she expected him to-. No, absolutely not. There was absolutely, positively NO way that he was going to…
Noal’s feet sunk deeper into the sand with each step. He shifted his body to compensate but was only rewarded with Ella drooling all over his shoulder. She was about a foot taller than Noal, skewing far closer to athletic than dainty, which made her awkward to carry. At least the fifty pound supply bag on his chest evened his center of gravity out. “Geez, how can a woman who hasn’t eaten in almost five days still be so heavy?” Noal mumbled. He could’ve sworn he felt her knee him in the rib. Noal wandered onward, putting his faith in the seemingly
endless line of the golden thread, just as he always had before. Once or twice, a small town or oasis crept up
over the dunes, but then vanished just as quickly - mere mirages. By the time the dancing elephants and
bikini-clad women appeared, he had all but given up on finding any real salvation. So his skepticism was perfectly warranted
when, a half-day later, a massive city conveniently appeared in the
distance. Noal kept expecting it to
vanish as he got closer, but this mirage was particularly stubborn, growing
larger and larger until he found himself in the monolithic shadow of its outer
wall. “I don’t care… if you’re real this time or not. I can’t take another step,” he confessed to no one in particular, collapsing to the ground. He lay there for a good, almost relaxing few seconds, before piercing excitement erupted above him. “We’re
finally here!” she shouted. Noal lifted
his thousand pound head just enough to see the silhouette of Ella, stretching
out as though waking up from a nap.
“Isn’t it wonderful Noal!?” Noal seethed. “Well, don’t you seem suddenly energetic?” “Oh… right… Hmm, well I guess I must’ve suffered a bit of sun stroke, didn’t I?” she said, turning to him with a pitiful false cough. “Liar!” Her feigned weakness morphed into an indifferent shrug. “Well either way, we’re here now; no sense in getting angry.” “And where is here exactly?” Ella pointed to a hanging sign high above them. ‘Welc_me to Fortun_ T_wn’ Noal glowered but Ella was impervious to it. “Come on, get up! I can’t wait to have a look around!”
Noal pulled his head out of the water trough after nearly
drowning himself and let loose an exhillerated sigh. Beside him, a black horse stared in
bemusement. “Come
on Ferdinand. Leave that one alone,”
said its straw hatted owner, pulling the animal away. He muttered “weirdo” under his breath as they
walked off. “Satisfied?” asked Ella. “Not even in the slightest.” They’d wandered through that scorching hot desert for this? The place was a dump! She’d promised him class and culture; a city with some history to it. In reality, Fortune Town was nothing more than a crumbling mosaic of poorly constructed buildings, rusty roofs, and decaying streets. The only history here was the unwanted bits that travelers ditched before heading somewhere else! As they navigated the dense morning crowd together, Noal
couldn’t be more annoyed by the huge smile on his partner’s face. Was it possible this was actually what she
was expecting? “I can’t believe I let you drag me all the way out here for this.” “Me? Wasn’t it your golden thread that led us here? Or are you trying to tell me that you just happened to stumble across this place in the middle of the desert with no map and your horrid sense of direction?” Noal mumbled, “well… yeah, I suppose...” “Then
what are we arguing about!? Honestly, you’d
enjoy life a lot more if you’d just lighten up a bit. Maybe even show a little bit of, oh I don’t
know, enthusiasm from time to time.” “Enthusiasm!?” Noal blurted. “Please tell me exactly why I should be ‘enthusiastic’ that we just spent the last five days on the verge of death just to reach this dirty, run-down gambling city!?” “Run-down? Look around you! Look at this architecture! There must’ve been over half-a-dozen generations that put this place together!” “Yeah,
half-a-dozen generations of drunks, hippies, and gamblers. Ella, it’s like they just took the slums of
every other city, squashed them together, and then dropped them in the middle
of nowhere!” Noal pointed to a precarious looking building with a sheet
metal roof, perched atop another equally precarious looking building. The entire structure swayed with even the
slightest breeze. “Hey, I like it,” she said with a shrug. “Maybe they don’t have the best engineers, but at least it shows that normal people have potential too.” “The
potential for what? Building a death
trap? It’s a wonder that this place has
survived as long as it has! Who in their
right mind would live here!?” “Noal!” The ball landed high above them, catching a guard rail on
a rooftop. It wasn’t long after that
Noal felt a small tug at his cloak. “Mister, what’d you go and that for!?” It was a small child, probably no older than five or six
years, his eyes welled with tears.
Behind him, a small army of onlookers stared in disapproval. “I… uh… sorry I didn’t mean.” “Honestly,” Ella said, rolling her eyes. She knelt down on one knee and put a hand on the child’s shoulder. “Ignore the mean old man.” “Hey!” Ella motioned for Noal to zip-it and then gestured for the other kids to come closer. “Here, want to see something cool?” she asked. The sniffling kid wiped the tears from his eyes and nodded. Ella picked up a small pebble from the street and quickly surveyed the area. After licking her finger, she drew some invisible calculations in the air. “Watch this.” Ella pulled back and tossed the small pebble up against the side of a wall. The pebble ricocheted to the opposite side, disturbing a crow. The crow took off, shaking the metal trough it was sitting on and dislodging the small pebble once again so it rolled across before falling off and striking a hanging chime outside a balcony door. A few seconds later, the door opened and a woman had a quizzical look around. Not finding anyone, she shrugged and shut the door with a bang. The entire structure shook, dislodging the ball and sending it rolling down the rooftop. It launched itself off the edge, fell two stories, and landed right into Ella’s outstretched palm. “Here you go kid.” The crowd gasped with a chorus of oohs and ahs before breaking into full applause. Ella patted the kid on the head while simultaneously beaming to Noal with unmistakable self-satisfaction. “Show off,” he muttered. Another tug caught Noal’s attention. He looked down to find a second child underneath his cloak, pulling at the brace on his left arm. “Hey mister, what’s wrong with your arm?” “Don’t touch that! Go, shoo!” Noal yanked the kid out and instinctively turned away. The kid scrunched his face and stuck out his tongue before him and his friends ran off. Noal pulled his cloak back down to hide the brace underneath. Ella snickered. “You know, if you really wanted to show off, you could’ve just shown him your arm.” Noal wasn’t laughing. “I think we both know that would be a very bad idea.” They ducked into the nearest bar, a modest place with a sign reading Gracey’s. The inside was larger than it looked from the outside and heavily populated with some less than upstanding clientele. A line of men sat at the bar, staring at them as they entered. They ranged from skinny and sickly to grossly overweight. The bartender wasn’t winning any prizes either; Noal could’ve sworn she saw something move from within his beard. It was hardly what one would call a five star establishment, but on the other hand they’d wandered The Fringe for so long that he hardly remembered what a five star establishment even looked like. “So, what do you think?” Ella asked. Noal’s distrustful eyes darted around the room like a fly caught in a glass jar. “I think we should just find out why the golden thread led us here and get out, before anything else bad happens.” “I meant, what do you think about the menu.” Noal just shot her a bemused look. “Oh lighten up. You worry too much for a guy with the nickname of the Hu…” Noal reached over the table and put his hand over her mouth. “Are you crazy!? Don’t’ say it! Unless you want even more trouble, that is,” he hissed, reactively pulling this cloak a little tighter. Ella pulled his hand off. “All I’m saying is relax! You have the greatest fortune teller in the western hemisphere backing you up, remember? Before we go rushing back into the desert again, what say we at least get some food in us first?” For once Noal had no retort; he was awfully hungry. They
both sat for a precious few quiet moments, perusing the specials: minced sand
kiwi - twenty-four platinum pieces, fried griffon-bird egg " thirty platinum
pieces, armored lizard stew with desert radishes " forty-five platinum
pieces. Yet even as they sat there, Noal
was already acutely aware of another problem brewing. At first he thought he was just hearing things: a choir of cheers and laughter quickly silenced, then ringing bells and shuffling cards again silenced. He soon realized the sounds were very real. The grin on Ella’s face widened in perfect synchronization with Noal’s own frown. He turned around in his seat to find a waiter moving back and forth through an alcove leading to a casino on the other side! Slot machines, game tables, high rollers, and big spenders, she caught all of it in the blink of an eye. Ella was already salivating, and Noal knew it wasn’t from the food. “So, this is the reason you dragged me here,” Noal grumbled. Ella’s wide, uncontrollable smile was her only response. “Ella, tell me, do you even HAVE any money left to gamble away?” Realization hit her like an arrow to the chest. She frantically fingered through her pockets
and pouches, predictably coming up with only two copper pieces. “Just a few plats! A couple of notes! Copper pieces even!” she pleaded, going into full begging mode. “I’ll double it in fifteen minutes!” “Oh really? You’ll double it will you? And I suppose that’s what happened when you bet on that horse race in Gram City?” “I was getting forty-to-one odds!” “Ella, your horse DIED before reaching the finish line!” She opened her mouth to rebuttal, but then just shrugged. “Okay, I may have slightly misread Fate on that one. How was I supposed to know horses only live to be twenty-five?” “Then there was that little card game with the Sundance Society. How much did you lose there again?” “Hey, that wasn’t my fault. They were cheating!” “YOU were cheating!” Ella recalled. “Oh yeah,” she said, with a crooked
grin. “Almost got away with that one.” Noal just put his head in his hands. “Look, don’t go getting your threads in a knot just because I can control my spending. For once can we please just sit here and have a nice quiet meal. I’ll even buy you a nice lentil salad, how’s that?” Ella looked at the two measly copper pieces in front of her and deadpanned. “My, you’re so generous.” Noal rolled his eyes. “Look, let’s not forget the real reason we’re here.” Ella’s eyes instinctually darted
to Noal’s left arm. “Ah yes, the cure.”
Now she was the one rolling her eyes. “Hey! Don’t give me that look. We can’t all use our abilities to wow street crowds and retrieve lost little balls for kids. Some of us have bigger problems.” “Of course, of course,” she pandered, brushing him off with her hand as she snatched up her two copper coins and stood up from the booth. “Hey, where are you going?” “Go on, go find your cure. You have your business to sort out, and so I have mine.”
She was impossible, he thought as he watched her walk off,
although at least she saved him buying that extra salad. How could it be, even after all this time,
she still wasn’t convinced he needed a cure?
It boggled his mind. What did she
know anyway? Maybe if she ended up on a few newspaper covers
for the kinds of things he did... No,
that would almost surely encourage her. “Got your eye on that one, eh? She’s got a lot of spunk, that’s for sure.” A voice from the bar interrupted his train of thought. Noal looked over and found the bartender leaning across it, staring intently at him, the last of his patrons putting down some loose change and stumbling off to the doors. “My eye" on her? Ha. She’s more trouble that she’s worth.” “Trouble’s what makes-em worth it,” the bartender responded with a sly grin and a lick of his lips. Noal shuddered involuntarily. He could smell the man’s breathe all the way
from the booth " a rotten combination of bad olives and whisky. He wore a pressed black vest and bowtie, yet
somehow was still absolutely filthy. His
thick black beard looked as if it were painted onto his face, which itself was
a cracked wasteland of wrinkle valleys and oily lakes with one mountainous
black wart anchoring it all on his left cheek.
He must have been at least fifty years old, but that didn’t stop him
from ogling Ella and licking his lips. “Trust me,” Noal said. “We’re travelling together and I’m telling
you now, whatever you’re thinking, she’s not worth it.” “Heh, a travel companion like that, eh? What she cost you?” “Oh I got a real bargain. All she cost me was my dignity.” Noal returned his attention to the menu, hoping the bartender
would get bored and go away. His choking
musk was overpowering even the smell of food the next booth over. “So what’s yer story kid?” he asked, still looking at Ella. “Runaway? Con artist? Refugee?” He leaned in and leered. “Convict?” “W-What makes you say that?” Noal
squeaked.
“Dunno kid, you look tense. Only two kinds of people come to Fortune Town. Those lookin’ to get rich, and those lookin’ to get away. And, well, if you’d made it rich, you wouldn’t be sittin’ in a dump like this, would’ya?” Noal had dealt with enough bounty hunters in his time to know that grin. Discreetly, he grabbed the butter knife from the table. The bartender bellowed a deep laugh that shook him. “Haha, don’t worry kid. Whatever you’re worth, it can’t even be close to what I’m worth!” he laughed, spitting into a glass and giving it a shine with his washcloth. “I’ll let you in on a little secret. I’m wanted in every nation on this planet. I’m a horrible man who done horrible things. I caused so much chaos they got a real special name for me. The Human Hurricane.” Noal lowered the menu and gave the bartender a sideways glance. “The Human Hurricane? Right.” He rolled his eyes, dipped the knife in a package of butter, and started spreading it over a piece of bread. “What? Ain’t you ever heard of the Human Hurricane? I’m the scourge of the seven nations! The Great Destroyer himself! I’m the most wanted man in the world!” “The Human Hurricane is just a myth,” Noal said, not even looking up. “You aren’t him.” The bartender grunted. “A myth!? Would the nations be offerin’ a joint twenty-million platinum reward for a myth!? They want me ‘cause of all the stuff I done: bustin’ up whole cities, puttin’ whole droves of their people in the hospital!” “Right, and I’m sure that was all you.” “You better believe it was! You really ought t’be afraid o’me. I even wiped out my entire home town!” Noal suddenly stopped dead, his mocking expression turning gravely serious. “I remember
it like it was yesterday… sittin’ around in that boring fart of a town. How can I start my legacy, I thought to
myself one day.”
Like a wild animal, Noal suddenly leapt the distance
between the booth and the bar, grabbing the bartender’s collar and pulling him
face-to-face. “That’s
not how it happened!” The bartender, stunned by the sudden outburst, stammered stupidly for a few seconds before finally comporting himself with a raised eyebrow. “Really? What would you know o’that?” Oh how he’d like to show him, Noal thought, but infuriating as this man was, even he didn’t deserve that. At least, this was what Noal thought until his eyes stumbled upon the black streaks on the bartender’s forearm. Noal tilted his head and his whole body froze. “Where… where did you get that tattoo!?” Noal stammered. “My tattoo? What’s it to you?” The sight of those black marks made all Noal’s reservations forfeit. For the first time in a long time, he purposely rolled up his cloak and held up his left arm, revealing a cage of belts and buckles encased around a jet-black tattoo of sinister tendrils. The bartender’s eyes grew wide with fear. “Now, like I said before, where did you get your tattoo!?” Noal demanded. “You little cheater!” an unfamiliar voice shouted from the casino floor. Noal’s expression melted into utter horror. The bearded bartender just smiled. “Well would you listen to that? Guess you were right. Your friend really is more trouble than she’s worth.” © 2011 TOF_MattAuthor's Note
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