Bottle Minds

Bottle Minds

A Poem by ROXANE DORSEY

Living mentally in a bottle.
I must shatter the walls or
life will stall. In this glass
lies my past. Presently I'll
build up waste & gas to get
the needed blast. Screw the
cork loose with ease.  For I 
can take the easy way out, 
straight up no cuts or gusts
to waste.

© 2017 ROXANE DORSEY


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this is good
we all live in glass some time in our life
we hide in glass some days
hoping no one willnotice us
but we are all goldfish in a bowl
on view for everyone to judge and see
it seems
good work

Posted 6 Years Ago


ROXANE DORSEY

6 Years Ago

glad you like the poem. thanks for the review.
straight out...the only way...if we let the past bottle us up and we just take baby steps...the lid will keep closing on us.
j.

Posted 6 Years Ago


Les Chats Heureux

6 Years Ago

Could the bottle be represented like the "circle of comfort" we tend to stay in ?

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Added on October 22, 2017
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Tags: #minds, #bottle, #screw

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ROXANE DORSEY
ROXANE DORSEY

baltimore, MD



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love poetry since it has been embedded in my mind deeply way back when I was 4 years old. A very good reader in pre-school. Nursery rhymes tuned me in even deeper. more..

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