Save Her

Save Her

A Poem by Alex Figueroa
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For my daughter

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A mid-summers day
Leaves flowing, trees fraying
Gentle breeze whispering nay
A room, a pillow, a bed, a picture
A husband, a wife, a daughter
A teddy bear beside the frame
A shadow dwells over the bear
A hand reaches out, suddenly being stopped
Two rings shine, fingers locked
The glass of the frame cracks
Canyons ripple across the heirs visage
A weeping sparrow, eggs cracked
Wrapping arms around the mother goddess
Heavens opening to welcome the arrival
A soul as pure as light my rest at last
A couple may start anew
From the ashes rise again, a phoenix
But until then mi hija, lo siento...im so sorry... 

© 2011 Alex Figueroa


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Author's Note

Alex Figueroa
R.I.P. Serenity Figueroa...god bless and keep your soul high in heaven for you are in a better place, mommy & daddy love you so very very much, be happy for the both of us, since you're so lucky to escape the torment of this world..we love you<3

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Too emotional when it comes to a child's death.
Hope you move on. Yes, may she rest in peace.

Posted 6 Years Ago


Alex Figueroa

6 Years Ago

thank you, i really do appreciate it, nice to know that people care just as much.
Daisie "Dhaye" Vergara (Daisie Partido)

6 Years Ago

:)
Alex Figueroa

6 Years Ago

=P
i can see how much emotions you're expressing there..i like this line:"wrapping arms around the mother goddess".well penned :)

Posted 6 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Brave girl

6 Years Ago

you're sure about it?!!...i can deal with that :p
Alex Figueroa

6 Years Ago

ofcourse i am, i must be insane, explains a lot actually, but yeah! deal with it =P
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Wow, this piece holds so much emotion, it draws you in from the very first line. I actually teared up a little when I realized the outcome of this piece. So sad... I am very sorry for your loss and may your family fine peace amongst these hard times.

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Alex Figueroa

6 Years Ago

thank you and i'm glad you wished me well, i'm sorry for the VERY late reply, i had to rebuild mysel.. read more

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Alex Figueroa
Alex Figueroa

Worcester, MA



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