Third Eye

Open your mind
and search inside,
for the key of freedom
in the darkness it hides.

Reviews

[Rana]

I like how you used 'third eye' to refer to the mind. Meaningful, beautiful. What I found best about this was how you sketched this picture: the thoughts are the key of freedom and they are visually colorless and dark but yet there's a metaphorical light in them. Plus, the rhyme sounds really good. I love this! :)

[Mara]

Thank you, so glad you liked it :)!

[Gregory Stires]

Short but deep, i like how much weight the poem itself has. and i like how inspiring it is and the message the poem sends out. sometimes we try to search for solutions by looking at the things around when in reality we need to look inside ourself where the answer hides.

[Mara]

thank you, happy you liked it :)

[Nisreen]

Such delicate words
inspiring light

[Mara]

Thank you :)

[mou]

really the toughest truth needs only few words to express...

[Mara]

very true:) thanks for checking it out!

[mou]

you are welcome Tee..

[mou]

you are welcome Tee..

[Crystal Overmeyer-Birmi..]

This is DEEP. I am not sure how to digest it, but i have a feeling i will chewing on it for a couple of days. Really love pieces that make you think. Well played.

[Mara]

Thank you glad you liked it :)!

[Rachael Lea]

Such a powerful knowledge I will hold true. Open for interpretation for all and not just a few.

[Mara]

love it :D!

[jesserose99]

I love this Tee...so open to interpretation. Really makes me think, had to read it a few times because I think it goes deeper then it looks on the surface.

[Mara]

yes exactly, glad you liked it!:)

[Emily]

Love it!
Short and sweet!
Keep it up!!

[Mara]

Thank you!:)

[BlaqkShadow]

Short and sweet, excellent :D Such a philosophical point well made x

[Mara]

thank you, glad you liked it !:)x

[Coyote Poetry]

I agree. Great wisdom in your words. Thank you Tee for sharing the excellent poetry.
Coyote

[Mara]

thank you, happy that you liked it:)

[Coyote Poetry]

I did and you are welcome.