A Solidified Soul

Solids are made to be melted...

In which biome you've been living till?

Where people are grim like you were

You used to play ruthless games

Laughter was like gale, enjoyed humans as edible

Gratitude to evils you were presenting that night

An element of that posh veneration

Was my fragile presence and brown eyesight

To perform the malice sacrifice by you

But something was there in your core

That smelt the evaporation of my dripping tears

You defeated the thunders of Satan that dawn

Was it because you're drowned in my beauty glares?

Now standing at the burnt ground of moor

In me I've the most mild fire, you whispered

Claimed that in solitude, solidified soul you had

And by me, in gradual grooves twas melted..

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Reviews

[Shubham Sharma]

The lines are as cute as a new born baby but the words are as deep as the moral of plays of Shakespeare. Whoever read this must be blessing you with bliss they acquire after reading your poem. Sometimes when a single concept is portrayed by poetry for many it's exasperating because they don't have enough imagination to think that a single concept, a single morale, a single word could have such a deep, profound and beautiful meaning. Thank you for sharing this poetry.

[Tahsin.Z🍁]

Am gonna cry by the reviews which am getting in this poem...just like a baby! Feelig glad just out of the world to have Shakespeare the great's name here...Universe full of thanks Shubham😊!

[Miss Sharon]

Love the poem but am disappointed that I could not hear the music...as I am a retired piano teacher. ~Sharon

[Mr. Ghost Stories]

To me, this poem is a metaphor of a pure emotional expression, of personal sacrifice, experience, and new perspective on life, and the meaning of happiness, it is a well thought out poem. Nice job.

[Tahsin.Z🍁]

Thank you so much!😀 remembering the time when I'd written this. Then a teen now being nostalgic. Be blessed🍀

[light and ashes]

I believe most hard souls can be melted in time with enough kindness. Whatever changes an individual into something better is a miracle. Beautiful.

[Tahsin.Z🍁]

I have been fortunate to witness this transformation, thank you for reading😇 be blessed and safe🍀

[light and ashes]

Thank you, you as well.

[AJNJ]

Such impressive and fiery words from a sweet little girl :)
I am really and truly impressed by your grasp on imagery and even satire. The way you call out this solidified soul is very spirited and I really like that. All four verses have great pull and metaphors that I enjoyed. I want you to keep building up on the poetry. I'm always here if you ever wish to write something jointly. Kudos Tahsin.

[Tahsin.Z🍁]

Haaa this was written when I was so much in poetry😄 that much that I was nearly failing in my exams! Thanks so much Jee for inspiring me in keeping my grip tight on this genre, I will try to prosper🍀

[AJNJ]

I hope you have passed your exams. Poetry doesn't get us any money so we need a good career to get us by. I write only at night in a relaxed mode. Still this is an awesome pastime and you can do wonders :)

[Thepensiveplayer]

Just wonderful! To me, this speaks of one overcoming a struggle of a sort and reaching a heightened place of solace. I definitely feel that the rose is a metaphor for a solidified soul as you put it. It's true solids are made to be melted and to spread out across like the petals of a beautiful soul. Keep up the good work!

[Tahsin.Z🍁]

I was actually trying to match the petals with it, great catch sir! Galore thanks for reading :)

[Darrin Reay]

Been reading through your work and each piece captivated me more and more. You have a beautiful way with words, a way that captures you and holds you in place for that moment until you're finished reading but even after, you're still thinking.

Thanks for this and for all your other pieces!

[Tahsin.Z🍁]

I solely thank you for taking your time on reading my pieces, too elated that you liked em, be blessed :)

[jacob erin-cilberto]

love, tenderness, tears...can break down an evil heart, a hard heart...the speaker has melted the subject, who once couldn't be kind, couldn't love...
like Robert Flack sang "killing me softly with his song"
softness overcomes the hardest people to break.
this has 70 reviews...wow, it deserves 100....
really fine work,
j.

[Tahsin.Z🍁]

That's exactly! Kill their cruelty with your kindness...I dunno if it can be applied to the current generation or not but, I mostly like to rely on this quote....
Tis my pleasure to hear your valuable words upon my writing....Thanks galore my friend...Be blessed :)

[Anjeline]

Beautifully written. Each line is so sweet that it makes you read the poem again and again. Won't write much as I am busy reading this piece again ( and again) ;-)

[Tahsin.Z🍁]

😃and you uplifted my mood and bloomed a smile on my face! Thanks so much dear Anjeline, be blessed =)

[Anjeline]

You're welcome 💛

[wordman]

it looks like the winner to me...

[Tahsin.Z🍁]

And it did win prize but prizes (hearts) ;)
So many thank yous for being here!😀

[Tahsin.Z🍁]

Didn't*..... phew!!

[wordman]

you`re welcome

[Robert Trakofler]

very pretty line and title, this is definitely a spoken aloud type of poem to catch its full flavor and i melted a little too in reading it and it would be very hard not to! very strong and true your words cutting to kindness what a heart you have

[Tahsin.Z🍁]

Am elated that this piece did melt you...Hope you're fresh and ready for the spring! Many thanks for the visit here😄