A Solidified Soul

A Solidified Soul

A Poem by NO MORE
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Solids are made to be melted...

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In which biome you've been living till?
Where people are grim like you were
You used to play ruthless games
Laughter was like gale, enjoyed humans as edible

Gratitude to evils you were presenting that night
An element of that posh veneration
Was my fragile presence and brown eyesight
To perform the malice sacrifice by you

But something was there in your core
That smelt the evaporation of my dripping tears
You defeated the thunders of Satan that dawn
Was it because you're drowned in my beauty glares?

Now standing at the burnt ground of moor
In me I've the most mild fire, you whispered
Claimed that in solitude, solidified soul you had
And by me, in gradual grooves twas melted..
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Author's Note

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Thank you❤
[Piano played by me]

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The lines are as cute as a new born baby but the words are as deep as the moral of plays of Shakespeare. Whoever read this must be blessing you with bliss they acquire after reading your poem. Sometimes when a single concept is portrayed by poetry for many it's exasperating because they don't have enough imagination to think that a single concept, a single morale, a single word could have such a deep, profound and beautiful meaning. Thank you for sharing this poetry.

Posted 1 Year Ago


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1 Year Ago

Am gonna cry by the reviews which am getting in this poem...just like a baby! Feelig glad just out o.. read more



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love, tenderness, tears...can break down an evil heart, a hard heart...the speaker has melted the subject, who once couldn't be kind, couldn't love...
like Robert Flack sang "killing me softly with his song"
softness overcomes the hardest people to break.
this has 70 reviews...wow, it deserves 100....
really fine work,
j.

Posted 9 Months Ago


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9 Months Ago

That's exactly! Kill their cruelty with your kindness...I dunno if it can be applied to the current .. read more
Beautifully written. Each line is so sweet that it makes you read the poem again and again. Won't write much as I am busy reading this piece again ( and again) ;-)

Posted 10 Months Ago


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10 Months Ago

😃and you uplifted my mood and bloomed a smile on my face! Thanks so much dear Anjeline, be blesse.. read more
Anjeline

10 Months Ago

You're welcome 💛
it looks like the winner to me...

Posted 10 Months Ago


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10 Months Ago

And it did win prize but prizes (hearts) ;)
So many thank yous for being here!😀
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10 Months Ago

Didn't*..... phew!!
 wordman

10 Months Ago

you`re welcome
very pretty line and title, this is definitely a spoken aloud type of poem to catch its full flavor and i melted a little too in reading it and it would be very hard not to! very strong and true your words cutting to kindness what a heart you have

Posted 10 Months Ago


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10 Months Ago

Am elated that this piece did melt you...Hope you're fresh and ready for the spring! Many thanks for.. read more
Beautiful❤️ You’re a very talented writer. Thank you for sharing.

Posted 11 Months Ago


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11 Months Ago

Thank you dear hon! ;)
Great write!!! I'm slowly starting to be amazed with the concepts you have been using into your poems. This is another not so vastly kind of emotion. There's also an non linear characterization on subtle display. Please keep imagining. You do it so very well

Posted 11 Months Ago


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11 Months Ago

Will surely try to stick on this imaginary work....rest is left on time's wheel....Thanks so much ag.. read more
I am not used to young ladies expressing such deep thought in such a palatable manner
Very nicely done and well beyond the depth of my muses

Dave B

Posted 11 Months Ago


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11 Months Ago

These words made me honoured...thanks so much for read this dear friend...Be blessed :)
lovely flow of the words. This is really deep..looking forward to your writing more. Thanks for sharing this wonderful piece...

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11 Months Ago

Many thanks for your valuable words dear friend...I know you don't read genres like lovebut yet you .. read more
Hm! I had to reread to fully catch the depth of the lines, especially in the last half. For something that made me chuckle in the beginning, "In which biome you've been living till?" (I added an ! at the end and oh bio stop following me around, seriously!), this had a layered, lovely ending. I also think that beginning rose gif (which I stared at for a bit) made the first line more impactful as I was expecting a love poem--which I did get, but I was pleasantly thrown off by the beginning.
Also, "enjoyed humans as edible" I reacted, eh?! huh, hm, that's deep. lol
Most of the word choices and phrasing was like that, unusual but fascinating and speaking volumes.
Wonderful work that can chewed on but goes down smooth. ;) Charming little piece~

Posted 12 Months Ago


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12 Months Ago

Goodness! Am so elated to hear your valuable words upon my poem dear Chryiss! Guess you're right bo.. read more
Chryiss

12 Months Ago

You're welcome and thank you~! :)
Such elegance. I can't find words to explain how I feel after reading this. Bravo Tahsin---Bravo

Posted 12 Months Ago


Suhd

12 Months Ago

Always a pleasure, my friend :) You too :)
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12 Months Ago

We're awake like owls😁
Suhd

12 Months Ago

Yeah night owls we are. Searching for bunny rabbits :D

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