A Solidified Soul

A Solidified Soul

A Poem by Tahsin.Z🍁
"

Solids are made to be melted...

"


In which biome you've been living till?
Where people are grim like you were
You used to play ruthless games
Laughter was like gale, enjoyed humans as edible

Gratitude to evils you were presenting that night
An element of that posh veneration
Was my fragile presence and brown eyesight
To perform the malice sacrifice by you

But something was there in your core
That smelt the evaporation of my dripping tears
You defeated the thunders of Satan that dawn
Was it because you're drowned in my beauty glares?

Now standing at the burnt ground of moor
In me I've the most mild fire, you whispered
Claimed that in solitude, solidified soul you had
And by me, in gradual grooves twas melted..
___________❤___________

© 2019 Tahsin.Z🍁


Author's Note

Tahsin.Z🍁
Thank you❤
[Piano played by me]

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The lines are as cute as a new born baby but the words are as deep as the moral of plays of Shakespeare. Whoever read this must be blessing you with bliss they acquire after reading your poem. Sometimes when a single concept is portrayed by poetry for many it's exasperating because they don't have enough imagination to think that a single concept, a single morale, a single word could have such a deep, profound and beautiful meaning. Thank you for sharing this poetry.

Posted 2 Years Ago


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Tahsin.Z🍁

2 Years Ago

Am gonna cry by the reviews which am getting in this poem...just like a baby! Feelig glad just out o.. read more



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To me, this poem is a metaphor of a pure emotional expression, of personal sacrifice, experience, and new perspective on life, and the meaning of happiness, it is a well thought out poem. Nice job.

Posted 2 Months Ago


Tahsin.Z🍁

2 Months Ago

Thank you so much!😀 remembering the time when I'd written this. Then a teen now being nostalgic. .. read more
I believe most hard souls can be melted in time with enough kindness. Whatever changes an individual into something better is a miracle. Beautiful.

Posted 6 Months Ago


Tahsin.Z🍁

6 Months Ago

I have been fortunate to witness this transformation, thank you for reading😇 be blessed and safe�.. read more
Light and Ashes

6 Months Ago

Thank you, you as well.
Such impressive and fiery words from a sweet little girl :)
I am really and truly impressed by your grasp on imagery and even satire. The way you call out this solidified soul is very spirited and I really like that. All four verses have great pull and metaphors that I enjoyed. I want you to keep building up on the poetry. I'm always here if you ever wish to write something jointly. Kudos Tahsin.

Posted 6 Months Ago


Tahsin.Z🍁

6 Months Ago

Haaa this was written when I was so much in poetry😄 that much that I was nearly failing in my exa.. read more
AJNJ

6 Months Ago

I hope you have passed your exams. Poetry doesn't get us any money so we need a good career to get u.. read more
Just wonderful! To me, this speaks of one overcoming a struggle of a sort and reaching a heightened place of solace. I definitely feel that the rose is a metaphor for a solidified soul as you put it. It's true solids are made to be melted and to spread out across like the petals of a beautiful soul. Keep up the good work!

Posted 7 Months Ago


Tahsin.Z🍁

7 Months Ago

I was actually trying to match the petals with it, great catch sir! Galore thanks for reading :)
Been reading through your work and each piece captivated me more and more. You have a beautiful way with words, a way that captures you and holds you in place for that moment until you're finished reading but even after, you're still thinking.

Thanks for this and for all your other pieces!

Posted 8 Months Ago


Tahsin.Z🍁

8 Months Ago

I solely thank you for taking your time on reading my pieces, too elated that you liked em, be bless.. read more
love, tenderness, tears...can break down an evil heart, a hard heart...the speaker has melted the subject, who once couldn't be kind, couldn't love...
like Robert Flack sang "killing me softly with his song"
softness overcomes the hardest people to break.
this has 70 reviews...wow, it deserves 100....
really fine work,
j.

Posted 1 Year Ago


Tahsin.Z🍁

1 Year Ago

That's exactly! Kill their cruelty with your kindness...I dunno if it can be applied to the current .. read more
Beautifully written. Each line is so sweet that it makes you read the poem again and again. Won't write much as I am busy reading this piece again ( and again) ;-)

Posted 1 Year Ago


Tahsin.Z🍁

1 Year Ago

😃and you uplifted my mood and bloomed a smile on my face! Thanks so much dear Anjeline, be blesse.. read more
Anjeline

1 Year Ago

You're welcome 💛
it looks like the winner to me...

Posted 1 Year Ago


Tahsin.Z🍁

1 Year Ago

And it did win prize but prizes (hearts) ;)
So many thank yous for being here!😀
Tahsin.Z🍁

1 Year Ago

Didn't*..... phew!!
 wordman

1 Year Ago

you`re welcome
very pretty line and title, this is definitely a spoken aloud type of poem to catch its full flavor and i melted a little too in reading it and it would be very hard not to! very strong and true your words cutting to kindness what a heart you have

Posted 1 Year Ago


Tahsin.Z🍁

1 Year Ago

Am elated that this piece did melt you...Hope you're fresh and ready for the spring! Many thanks for.. read more
Beautiful❤️ You’re a very talented writer. Thank you for sharing.

Posted 1 Year Ago


Tahsin.Z🍁

1 Year Ago

Thank you dear hon! ;)

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