A Solidified Soul

Solids are made to be melted...

In which biome you've been living till?

Where people are grim like you were

You used to play ruthless games

Laughter was like gale, enjoyed humans as edible

Gratitude to evils you were presenting that night

An element of that posh veneration

Was my fragile presence and brown eyesight

To perform the malice sacrifice by you

But something was there in your core

That smelt the evaporation of my dripping tears

You defeated the thunders of Satan that dawn

Was it because you're drowned in my beauty glares?

Now standing at the burnt ground of moor

In me I've the most mild fire, you whispered

Claimed that in solitude, solidified soul you had

And by me, in gradual grooves twas melted..

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Reviews

[Shubham Sharma]

The lines are as cute as a new born baby but the words are as deep as the moral of plays of Shakespeare. Whoever read this must be blessing you with bliss they acquire after reading your poem. Sometimes when a single concept is portrayed by poetry for many it's exasperating because they don't have enough imagination to think that a single concept, a single morale, a single word could have such a deep, profound and beautiful meaning. Thank you for sharing this poetry.

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Am gonna cry by the reviews which am getting in this poem...just like a baby! Feelig glad just out of the world to have Shakespeare the great's name here...Universe full of thanks Shubham😊!

[jacob erin-cilberto]

love, tenderness, tears...can break down an evil heart, a hard heart...the speaker has melted the subject, who once couldn't be kind, couldn't love...
like Robert Flack sang "killing me softly with his song"
softness overcomes the hardest people to break.
this has 70 reviews...wow, it deserves 100....
really fine work,
j.

[NO MORE]

That's exactly! Kill their cruelty with your kindness...I dunno if it can be applied to the current generation or not but, I mostly like to rely on this quote....
Tis my pleasure to hear your valuable words upon my writing....Thanks galore my friend...Be blessed :)

[Anjeline]

Beautifully written. Each line is so sweet that it makes you read the poem again and again. Won't write much as I am busy reading this piece again ( and again) ;-)

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😃and you uplifted my mood and bloomed a smile on my face! Thanks so much dear Anjeline, be blessed =)

[Anjeline]

You're welcome 💛

[wordman]

it looks like the winner to me...

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And it did win prize but prizes (hearts) ;)
So many thank yous for being here!😀

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Didn't*..... phew!!

[wordman]

you`re welcome

[Robert Trakofler (Bad B..]

very pretty line and title, this is definitely a spoken aloud type of poem to catch its full flavor and i melted a little too in reading it and it would be very hard not to! very strong and true your words cutting to kindness what a heart you have

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Am elated that this piece did melt you...Hope you're fresh and ready for the spring! Many thanks for the visit here😄

[Grateful Hon]

Beautiful❤️ You’re a very talented writer. Thank you for sharing.

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Thank you dear hon! ;)

[Abhishek Izy]

Great write!!! I'm slowly starting to be amazed with the concepts you have been using into your poems. This is another not so vastly kind of emotion. There's also an non linear characterization on subtle display. Please keep imagining. You do it so very well

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Will surely try to stick on this imaginary work....rest is left on time's wheel....Thanks so much again for reading my write ups...Be blessed :)

[john l smith]

I am not used to young ladies expressing such deep thought in such a palatable manner
Very nicely done and well beyond the depth of my muses

Dave B

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These words made me honoured...thanks so much for read this dear friend...Be blessed :)

[Anurag]

lovely flow of the words. This is really deep..looking forward to your writing more. Thanks for sharing this wonderful piece...

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Many thanks for your valuable words dear friend...I know you don't read genres like lovebut yet you went through this piece....Much appreciated! Be blessed :)

[Chryiss]

Hm! I had to reread to fully catch the depth of the lines, especially in the last half. For something that made me chuckle in the beginning, "In which biome you've been living till?" (I added an ! at the end and oh bio stop following me around, seriously!), this had a layered, lovely ending. I also think that beginning rose gif (which I stared at for a bit) made the first line more impactful as I was expecting a love poem--which I did get, but I was pleasantly thrown off by the beginning.
Also, "enjoyed humans as edible" I reacted, eh?! huh, hm, that's deep. lol
Most of the word choices and phrasing was like that, unusual but fascinating and speaking volumes.
Wonderful work that can chewed on but goes down smooth. ;) Charming little piece~

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Goodness! Am so elated to hear your valuable words upon my poem dear Chryiss! Guess you're right bout the first line of this poem...twas marked as humorous by few of my readers and friends....
Many thanks for reading and taking your time in reviewing dear....
Almighty's grace be upon you, ameen :)

[Chryiss]

You're welcome and thank you~! :)

[Suhd]

Such elegance. I can't find words to explain how I feel after reading this. Bravo Tahsin---Bravo

[NO MORE]

Your silence spoke million words!
Many many thanks for reading dear Suhd....Be blessed, always :)

[Suhd]

Always a pleasure, my friend :) You too :)

[NO MORE]

We're awake like owls😁

[Suhd]

Yeah night owls we are. Searching for bunny rabbits :D