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Pleasing Poison

Pleasing Poison

A Poem by Tahsin.Z🍁
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Furling a piece of foil
into a hollow little roll
he puffs pleasing poison;
sleeps isolated from realism
There are pipe dreams in his eyes,
brightens when twilight disappears
His comatose brain films radiant reveries
at night, within his mind’s stilled senses
Ordeals of failure constrained him to shut
the shop of sterling virtues residing in his heart
Switched it to exhibition of aggressive notions;
inaugurated bad blood between him and life
When he finds no pleasing poison,
lacerating arms calms him down
Thirst and hunger abandoned
He’s a spectacular skeleton
in loneliness’s grave
  sans elation

© 2018 Tahsin.Z🍁


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never could understand why any body does this crap

Posted 1 Year Ago


Tahsin.Z🍁

1 Year Ago

Nor could I😕
 wordman

1 Year Ago

who knows ,it might be great,but i doub`t it bourbon and coke and mayme some smoke,i know angel has.. read more
Wonderful explanation on a drug addict. Any addiction sucks and people tend to forget that people start doing drugs to get away from reality. Withdrawal, by chance or on purpose, can literally kill you. You feel like your dying, you look like a skeleton. The shivers, the stiffness, you can't pay attention to anything or think clearly. The pleasing poison is pleasing for the mind, but only for a short time. The poison devours you, and those around you. Very elegant, but I expect nothing less when it comes from you ;)

Much Love

Posted 1 Year Ago


Tahsin.Z🍁

1 Year Ago

Am on the seventh sky of joy today!!...many thanks for the greatly encouraging review my friend...am.. read more
amazing one dear Candy, and I believe one of Your bests, strong images written very well, flowing with strong feelings, I love it when young writers write about different things around them, it means they are aware and care about making the world better, the hope of future they are.

Posted 1 Year Ago


Tahsin.Z🍁

1 Year Ago

Ahan! You appreciated me so sweet😇....Thanks really very much my dear Light angel for the encoura.. read more
Tahsin, your poem is powerful and an excellent portrayal of the problems of drug abuse that is rampant around the world. Your language and poetic images are innovative and refreshing. Thanks for posting such an expressive write. :)

Posted 1 Year Ago


Tahsin.Z🍁

1 Year Ago

Thanks a lot dear Tamara for such an uplifting review!!..am indeed honoured by your words....**hugs*.. read more
Tamara Beryl Latham

1 Year Ago

You've earned those words, Tahsin.

Keep up with your writing. :)
You have chosen excellent words to express his agony and describe his trap. It takes a tender heart to observe and understand this kind of human suffering. You have that ability. Keep it up Tasin.

Posted 1 Year Ago


Tahsin.Z🍁

1 Year Ago

Will try till the last my friend...thanks for the encouragement!😇
Dhara_Ditzy Kat

1 Year Ago

You are welcome and carry on writing.
An eloquent poem about someone addicted to smoking some opium or something else. Beautiful expressed and sad.

Posted 1 Year Ago


Tahsin.Z🍁

1 Year Ago

Thank you dear Dawn!!😄😄😄
Actually it's well description poem about drug addiction which I never seen like this poem.your Poems about reality situations like this are amzing because I love to read the poems which has reality more than imagination.

Posted 1 Year Ago


Tahsin.Z🍁

1 Year Ago

Your words motivated me dear friend!! Many thanks for going through this piece :)
Vikas

1 Year Ago

Your welcome dear friend.
i am really devastated on the effects of drug addiction especially in my country where innocent lives are taken by this poison and i really hope for the druglords and manufacturers out there your time will come that there is karma and i hope it happens fast and the soonest too

Posted 1 Year Ago


Tahsin.Z🍁

1 Year Ago

Am witnessing same of situations here...youth's collapsing by the consumption of drugs! Thanks for u.. read more
Tahsin.Z🍁

1 Year Ago

kind of*..
A perfect description of an addict and addiction. A beautiful piece.

Posted 1 Year Ago


Tahsin.Z🍁

1 Year Ago

Thanks so much, Suhd! (I spelled correct😄)
Suhd

1 Year Ago

You sure did :D
Tahsin.Z🍁

1 Year Ago

Yayyy!!!😃

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