Thousands of City Lights

Thousands of City Lights

A Poem by Tahsin.Z🍁
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Long distance relationship.... "One's night at one's morn"

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You're fay's akin though visible to my lens 
I do gaze my flock of thoughts at your charm
You sleep under a silver plate's beam, sans it sometimes,
Just when an orange with fusion comes to wake me up

I boil affection in faith's pot on love's flame;
pour it in ardour's cup to sip it by your name
Winds eavesdrop; pretend to be in a rush

Chink of hope seems, lump of distance is known  
Two white screens and a trap of connection has sown 
us into pink ground, we're seedlings of virtual town
Most of such decease before they blossom but we won't

Your neck is to be adorned by my both arm's torse
 Gotta catch you, even if am thousands of miles away,
also thousands of city lights between us to cross...

© 2020 Tahsin.Z🍁


Author's Note

Tahsin.Z🍁

Image : Sunrise view from 16th floor.

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Very nice! This poem is so mature and yet so simple. The images are vivid and daring but they find a way to sail smoothly. This is the first poem I read since I'm back and I don't regret it. Nice job!

Posted 6 Months Ago


Tahsin.Z🍁

6 Months Ago

Helloo loveliest poetess!😀 It's a great surprise for me to have you here. Unlimited thanks, love.. read more
very lovely poem,imagery and music

Posted 6 Months Ago


Tahsin.Z🍁

5 Months Ago

Thank you wordman!😇
 wordman

5 Months Ago

you`re welcome
Very sweet conversation from remote places.May I call this remoteness a blessing? Had there been no remoteness how such lovely thoughts would be generated yielding the wonderful flower of passion.
Viewed from a different angle.You have the liberty to refute.
Enjoyed the great work with the sauce of sweet song.

Posted 7 Months Ago


Tahsin.Z🍁

5 Months Ago

Am absolutely sorry for replying so late Sir, things go out of grip faster than sand! We have seen s.. read more
Watching the sun as they gaze at the moon, eating breakfast as they supper, like living in the upside down, tethered to a connection that reaches into the far, far away. But just why it has to be tethered to two hearts is anyone's guess. An arm or a leg would be much less painful when the distance can't be closed.
But one day......
😀

Posted 9 Months Ago


Tahsin.Z🍁

9 Months Ago

Yes dear Lorry, for that one day I and many are waiting! Thanks so much for your precious words, hav.. read more
Lorry

9 Months Ago

And you too... And three and four. 😀
Beautifully written. Thank you for sharing:)

Posted 9 Months Ago


Tahsin.Z🍁

9 Months Ago

Thank you Mary! I appreciate your visit here =)
Kinda makes me want to believe in long distance relationships. You have an eloquent writing style which I really liked.

Posted 10 Months Ago


Tahsin.Z🍁

10 Months Ago

I solely appreciate your words, thanks so much for giving this a read :)
Hello
Long time now

Did you remember me little sister??


Posted 10 Months Ago


Tahsin.Z🍁

10 Months Ago

I very well do brother. Apologies for not replying early, the case is I don't open messages anymore... read more
Abraham George

10 Months Ago

My another little sister Najam's Marriage is fixed.
I'm good
I hope you're good and h.. read more
Romantic enough to read and wonder...then wander. Thank you ☺

Posted 1 Year Ago


Tahsin.Z🍁

1 Year Ago

You're welcome and I thank you too...for reading this and reviewing....Much appreciated! :)
Amazing use of words and thoughts. You made the reader believe and understand the words. I love the highways poetry. Thank you Tahsin for sharing the amazing poetry. I did like this one.
Coyote

Posted 1 Year Ago


Tahsin.Z🍁

1 Year Ago

You definitely bloomed a smile on my face by your valuable words upon this piece....Thanks many and .. read more
Coyote Poetry

1 Year Ago

I love your work and you are welcome Tahsin.

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~ain't ever on top will collapse someday, to answer~ An eighteen years old, hailing from a small corner, I love to read poems and leave my thoughts on them. Best wishes -Tahs.. more..

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