Way To Unknown Street

Way To Unknown Street

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"

If they shan't end up, what they shall do?

"
24th of April, 2002, Wednesday (10 : 00 PM)

Rehan knelt down before Siya with two diamond studded rings in his each hand and an endearing glance in his face. 

"Which one's mine?" said Siya with null expression upon her body. 

"Both have the same intention" Rehan sighed...

"I love the left one, not silver nor golden, rose gold"

"Hmmm, the last taste is worth being in choice. I'll take the right one then. Aye Siya, mind me make you have your one by my hand?"

"You wished what I wanted to happen, go on" said Siya with two crystal drops stilled in the inner corners of her eyes.

"My rolly polly bumble bee, gulp this ring in seconds three...1, 2, 3...now, yours turn my love!" 

"Oh stalwart bear of my dreams, consume this gift before my death drums....."


They both closed their eyes; embraced themselves and waited for the shower of unconsciousness upon them. Few moments later they reached the "Way to Unknown Street" where souls of many Romeo-Juliets were discerned as they opened their eyes.
The new pair then resided in that gainsaid and too distant part of this cosmos....


Seasons' breeze blows the souls, they converge where?
Willy-nilly, they won't be stepping back in here
Empty basement called sky hides its unknown upstairs 
From there, the souls drip tears that get frozen as clouds....

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Author's Note

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More than many thanks for reading!💖

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wow wow thanks so much for entering this into my competition, loved it, good luck

Posted 4 Months Ago


You have such a strong grasp over the words which designs your imaginations in the paper. I'm so delighted at the fluidity. You have an ensemble of being a good writer. God Bless You

Posted 6 Months Ago


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6 Months Ago

🙇Always elated to find you liking my work....May Almighty's grace be upon you, ameen =)
Abhishek Izy

6 Months Ago

Thank you Dear!
Had to read this post twice,, unsure of its journey. There was obviously a deeply felt love, brief hints as to what was going to happen. Seems there's a true passion shared, yet.. a soon to be tragic escape from life. Your dialogue is endearing and as the writing gently fadesm it becomes strangely hypnotic. 'Empty basement called sky hides its unknown upstairs - From there, the souls drip tears that get frozen as clouds....'

Posted 6 Months Ago


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6 Months Ago

Souls* love* 😥
emmajoy

6 Months Ago

Many thanks for your thanks.. and i uunderstood.
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6 Months Ago

😘💖😘....
wow,this is a great story

Posted 6 Months Ago


 wordman

6 Months Ago

you flatter me,i`m blushing,,i wish i could write,,you`re welcome as always my friend
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6 Months Ago

I don't coat sugar....just true said😄
 wordman

6 Months Ago

you are one of a kind
Empty basement called sky hides its unknown upstairs
From there , souls drip tears that get frozen as clouds..
Loved these lines..Tany you are indeed a very talented writer..I.loved this story..It was so heart-touching..and the title was so exact for this story..When I started reading this story , I was not expecting this ending but it was so good...Well done Tany..Keep writing..
Take care..
Riddhi..


Posted 6 Months Ago


Riddhi

6 Months Ago

Yeah..I know..I have been busy these days jn my studies..I am fine..What about you??
NO MORE

6 Months Ago

I'm stuck in a study-traffic😰...You definitely know this pain....
Riddhi

6 Months Ago

I can understand it very well my dear Tany even I am feeling the same way right now..And this is the.. read more
Well! I like the balance of the passage and the phrase. But I find both of them incomplete without each other. Well I tried to read them separately. And believe me it was not that good! you've done a very good job here. It was very cleaver approach. The perfect mixture of melody and dialogues. it was like if someone make cappuccino from Espresso. A cleaver enhancement. Keep it up...

Posted 6 Months Ago


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6 Months Ago

Will try to be in this track....Many thanks for giving this piece a visit...Be blessed :)
I agree entirely with Coyote.. a delightful, readable and honest tale, told real well.. N

Posted 6 Months Ago


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6 Months Ago

That's surely and inspiration from you dear Neville...Thanks many and more :)
Neville Pettitt

6 Months Ago

a pleasure for sure, and all mine :)
Oh! It's a beautiful story and I really loved it. It had the correct balance of emotions and love. Beautifully written 👍

Posted 6 Months Ago


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6 Months Ago

Many thanks dear Anjeline....am elated to know that I could make you love this piece...Be blessed :).. read more
A wonderful story shared my friend. I enjoyed the communication and the thoughts of the characters. I liked the honest tone and real life feel to the words. Thank you Tahsin for sharing the amazing story.
Coyote

Posted 6 Months Ago


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6 Months Ago

Thanks so much dear friend....I appreciate your review and your inspiration....Best wishes and praye.. read more
Coyote Poetry

6 Months Ago

Was my pleasure and you are welcome Tahsin.

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