Solus at the end

Solus at the end

A Poem by Tahsin.Z🍁




Ne'er fortunately ours' eyes encountered us
Only mine used to peek upon your every move
Of all your likes, wishes, I've made an index
The pungent hooch, firewaters and booze

I reached to the rooms, wherein you have your signs
In one I'd stumbled, in a couple you'd dined 
What prickle the skin more bad than insects?
'tis the moment when I see, with another one you abide

My lively bulb hadn't that much strength 
to approach and pop the immersed affection 
Your knot now tied with a lady winsome 
Exiled in me laying my unrequited love

Ne'er would you know how a soul for you
agonised through the tunnel of melancholy,
My next unknown hope seems to be dawdling 
By your road goes the celestial euphoria  

~Time's plaque would put layers on my laments
Upon which I'll carve a happiest smile~

© 2020 Tahsin.Z🍁


Author's Note

Tahsin.Z🍁
A gift, gifted unknowingly, it's love.
Thanks for reading, be blessed♡

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The last line in particular reminds me of a frustrated house wife. I could taste the bitterness in this. Well done.

Posted 2 Weeks Ago


Tahsin.Z🍁

2 Weeks Ago

Very frustrating man, here many wives' men sail to the update countries for arranging a better life .. read more
Allie Brumfield

2 Weeks Ago

You're welcome
Sometimes we cannot win people over inspite of our best intentions and they are taken by someone else.
Like my previous owner was not entertaining enough so I shifted to my new mistress who serves me breakfast in bed and enough mice with cheese. So it’s a win-win situation. So there is always someone better coming along who understands our feelings.
Thanks for the soup and I’ll drop over for a cup of tea and bikkies soon.

Posted 1 Month Ago


Dhara_Ditzy Kat

1 Month Ago

I saw the samosas today. I’m coming for them. I’ll be bringing my own kitty sauce 😺🍝
Tahsin.Z🍁

1 Month Ago

😁😁 the door is always open for you!
Dhara_Ditzy Kat

1 Month Ago

Samosas & Soup umm yummy combination 😺 I love you girl 💕
Your love needs no approval it is and will always be sacred... those who are due it shall share in it the rest it’s all a journey...release what is not meant to be make space for blessings new🌹

Posted 1 Month Ago


Tahsin.Z🍁

1 Month Ago

You're fairy for me, now I believe I'm owning a sacred love ... Galore thanks dear and a happy day�.. read more
I had some issues understanding completely Your first two verses, like for example the first line of the first verse "ours eyes" should be "our eyes", and in the last line of the second verse "abide" as I know is a verb and it's wrong the way You used it here, but as I reached the third verse and till the end, You turn it into something appealing to me... the rhythm is wonderful, and some expressions are felt like it's personal, which I hope not for the sweet and Young girl You are, You lit hope a the end, and that's what maters, of course the artworks are perfect along Your words. be happy and smile my sweet 💕🍬

Posted 1 Month Ago


Tahsin.Z🍁

1 Month Ago

I'm so happy and grateful to have you read my poems my dear Light, missed you indeed. I clearly now .. read more
Light🌟

1 Month Ago

My sweet, just like You English is my second language so I can understand the challenges and difficu.. read more
Hey I'm learning from this one! Its great... I'm working on this style as well. Thanks for Sharing.

Posted 1 Month Ago


Tahsin.Z🍁

1 Month Ago

Thank you Aurora!~🌸🌸
Love baby! Don't remove me!

Posted 1 Month Ago


0 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Pestonjee_

1 Month Ago

yeah people are bitching around.
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Tahsin.Z🍁

1 Month Ago

No no! This man got kids' attack😅
I find it a little hard to read a poem written with a Shakespearean sound but yours is easy to follow becuz you just add a touch of that sound, here & there, to create a mood, but then most of your expression is straightforward. So many ways you express the usual sentiments of heartbreak in super fresh & unexpected ways: "My lively bulb hadn't that much strength to approach and pop the immersed affection" . . . you made me forget my biases about certain kinds of writing & I was immersed in your message instead! (((HUGS))) Fondly, Margie

Posted 1 Month Ago


Tahsin.Z🍁

1 Month Ago

😅 You're so sweet to say that dear Margie! Therr you said right, it's a usual sentiment but letha.. read more
The pain that unrequited love causes is huge to the one left with just their thoughts, as they walk into the horizon with another, yet the only consolation i can find, is the opposite of the saying "better to have loved and lost, to never have loved at all" because wheen it ends with one left devastated, it is hard to see how that quote would work. That too can be seen as unrequited, especially if you are the one left with the happy never after.
Either way is awful, and yes, I've tasted both.

Posted 1 Month Ago


Lorry

1 Month Ago

Ha, been there and done that 😀
Tahsin.Z🍁

1 Month Ago

Thank you friend! :D
Lorry

1 Month Ago

You're welcome buddy 😌
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SKY
Ah, after reading all your sad and heartfelt lines I'll only describe it in you few words - "Souls at the end"
Maybe, they are not your soulmates who either betrayed you or ignored your true feelings of love. Keep walking until you find your true love & your soulmate. After all we are all Souls at the end....

Posted 1 Month Ago


Tahsin.Z🍁

1 Month Ago

Absolutely, none deserves an ignorant mate, thanks so much for your valuable words, be blessed!
SKY

1 Month Ago

Most welcome!
Pestonjee_

1 Month Ago

you stay away !

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